Heaven Sent - Comments

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SO INTENSE WOMAN SO INTENSE

I had no idea what to expect, really. I mean, I knew what was going to happen and I had ideas of what could occur, but still. STILL.

Her nerves with Red! :3 Poor lady, I can't imagine dealing with that, seriously. I really can't, just... wow. But it shows so much strength to tell something like that!

I don't know what's wrong with me. I'll just blame you because we talk about him so much, yeah? But when Garrett looked at her sadly, my heart just broke for the guy. I mean, to imagine what he goes through in this chapter- he likes this girl and finally kisses her, only to have her ignore but when they see each other again, she announces she's life-or-death sick!

Emmy is wonderful! I love how you've made her character. She seems like such a great person, such a great person- she isn't perfect, but she tries so hard to be herself and she cares so much for everyone, very admirable. And her going after and talking to Izzy was just perfect.

Especially when she said "you won't die, I promise" that just... it just healed my heart. It's really the little things that people say that can change so much, that can mean so much. Izzy and Emmy both are just beautiful characters. Izzy portrays more innocence and inner strength, whereas Emmy is more... outer strength and independence/individuality.

Ugh. I just love this.

And what Emmy was saying about Garrett, I hope all of that was true and Emmy wasn't just saying that for her benefit or anything. Because that, that there... just.... I CAN LOVE NO OTHER.
what have you done to me.

But anyways, this is another wonderful chapter!!!!
I can't wait to find out what happens. When Garrett and Izzy really get to interact again!!!

<3

So sad, but in a good way

Kennedy all the way!

Can I marry this story?

Hope there's more izzy and Garrett in the next chapter.
&Hope she's well.
Update soon!

Update. Now. Please?
<3
Also, despite my love of Pat, I think the Kennedy one sounds more promising~

I Love This Story So Much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love this story sooooooooo much!!!!

OH MY GOD I'M SO EXCITED
and extremely nervous haha

Ugh I dont really know Jake but he sounds like an idiot and Emmy shouldn't I've him another chance…

And I hope that telling them goes well for her and everything works out between her and Garrett because he is so sweet!!!!!!

Your writing is awesome as it always was :) and I soooooo cannot wait for the next update!!!!! Much love to this story!!!!!

oh boy there's going to be DRAMA. but i really love this story.

Wow.

It seemed a little like a filler, I thought at first as I finished, but then I read it over and was like "heck no" becaue it's not. Every chapter you've written has its importance, wherever you place it. And this one was a bit... packed, really.

All of this was just great.

Except Emmy.... I'm not so sure. Jake... I don't trust him. I just don't. It could be that Emmy just feels lonely around the guys because all they are, are just friends you know? And she wants to be with someone- happens to us all. Hopefully, things will turn in her favor though!

The piano playing was very powerful indeed, it's a beautiful piece. Then her intensity in striving to play it, it was incredible- she wanted it perfect because her life is falling apart due to the disease raging inside of her. Very powerful! And then surrendering to her mother was big.

Garrett's message was very sweet and honest. Poor guy! He has no idea what happened and thinks its his fault and just aksdjfkdjfd I wanna hug him.

alskdfj the next chapter, oh my gosh. I can't wait. This is going to be so intense, won't it? I hope they forgive her for not telling in the first place! And hopefully things work out between her and Garrett :3

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Goodness, this is so freakin' good! <3 Poor Garrett, thinking it's all his fault. ): Can't wait for more! :D

OH MY GOD.
I just found this story and I've been reading it all day. I looove it! You've had me on an emotional roller coaster. I love Izzy's character. She's so raw and real. Garrett is so sweet! I love how the whole group really accepted her and I love the idea of the dares, it's hilarious. I teared up when she found out she was sick again and when Tyson talked about Jesse's death. Ah, I don't want her to die! I'm writing a a story as well about a girl with cancer and you do so well describing her symptoms I feel put to shame! But in a good way! hahah
La la la love this (:

I do not think the chapter was boring at all!!! It was great and the piano lessons threw me off guard so perfectly!!! I loved it and I can't wait until the next update XD

love this story.

PAGE SEVEN

W00T W00T

You had a hard time writing this chapter, but it went super well!!

Tyson totally confuses me, I swear. I just can't figure him out. He's been gone what, maybe two weeks and he's already returning?? Okay okay, so I did want him home, really... he just confuses me. Can he not make up his mind or somethign??? aklsdfjklds but otherwise, I'm glad that he's trying to be with his sister- that means a lot.

I'm glad she can joke a bit, and she still works hard in who she is while being sick. Izzy still confuses me as well though. Kind of bipolar about how she takes the bad news you know? She's not holding up hope, but... or it's really a good thing, that now and then she breaks through with some hope and focuses on the good around her, and can be happy and with friends and family. I love those parts. Except then, once alone again, she gets so down on herself and her future. It's so sad.

DONT DO THAT TO GARRETT NO ONE DESERVES THAT.

All I'm saying on his part. Seriously. Ugh.

She's transitionign! Why? Initeresting. But it does make sense to stop the physical exertion of ballet and switch to something less straining, piano. That's pretty good and I can't wait to see how her family- especially Tyson- takes to this switch.

Jesse*'s song
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N'aaaww, they kissed :)

I really wish Izzy would just tell Garrett, she should put herself first just once! Absolutley love this story and I can't wait to see what happens next.

I love how Everybody gets so concerned about Izzy even though they haven't known her that long and that Garrett and Izzy's relationship does a 180 from when she 1st me him to now

I finally finished and I only have one thing to say…THIS WAS AWESOME!!!! I love all the characters so I don't have a fave!!! I loved your writing and use of words all I know is that I shall cry if she dies in the end because she just opened up to life and everything plus Garett doesn't seem like a douche and it would suck if they fell in love only for her to leave!!!!! The outfits were awesome and I hope you don't mind but the next time my brother and our friends play truth or dare I am stealing some of your dares!!!! I have so much more to say but I am suffering from lack of food and am getting dizzier by the second so…loved it and can wait for the updateXD

OH AND I have one small request…if it isn't too much trouble could you send me all of the songs that you used? I have a thing for classical music as well as everything else :) I don't expect it reall soon but it would be nice if you could do so :)

Oh I just remembered I LOVED her tutu but I hate that she passed out onstage >:(