Heaven Sent - Comments

She needs to tell everyone else now. Her and Garrett also need to get something going:). Lol

awwww i don't want her to die :( her and garrett need to get together and live happily ever after forever

officially obsessedd =) i've never been the reader, just the writer so idk really know that to say, all that you've got me hooked! I feel like i finally need to google band since i have no idea how they actually look like in the flesh, they just feel like actual characters you made up haha.

awwww she had just started making friends. i am curious how this story will play out. please update soon

Oh. My. Gosh.

I mean, I expected to be sad and all, but this... this was so much more. It was so powerful and intense the way you wrote it. I'm already tearing up even though it's only the beginning and everything, you know?

Emmy... so sad, poor girl. No one deserves that emotional frustration, seriously. I wish there had been more detail, but that was fine. I guess we'll figure it out more in the end and everything as things build up... Red was sweet to offer her a ride, and it always sucks being locked out of the house, seriously. No fun. At all.

The cold waiting room was a clue!

With the doctor [already forgot his name] being surprised and scared himself, that was not reassuring in the least! :3 I mean, they're the ones who are supposed to hold the information, the facts, the hope, the cures, everything. To hear that come from someone with that 'power' is just...terrifying.

Tyson was so sweet, knowing she was broken..that piece was well written and my heart was hurting for them both.

So glad she made her parents listen... the conversation with her brother, though... that said so much! I loved it, really... realizing she actually has a crush is important, and that was sort of adorable how it came out.

But she is NOT dead yet! No she's not! She'll fight, and not in vain, I just know it! akjdfkds She's strong.

Tyson is so strong through it, too, I can tell. He tries so hard. They both do. I adore both of them... a beautiful chapter, if heart breaking!

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My favorite character is Izzy because you can't help but feel a connection with her as you read. I think it's a tie between Garrett and Izzy going bowling or Garrett just saving Izzy's life. Emmy and Izzy I'd have to say is the breakfast because I think they got to get to know each other even more and got to have girl time. There is defiantly no Emmy and Jake in the future I hope that is... Emmy is way to good for him, and I think she would be better off maybe somehow getting with Kennedy or maybe some other guy that can treat her the right way. Maybe he's a bit geeky and shy that draws her to him and he just knows how to make her happy and treat her like she's the only one in the world.

awwww he's so cute :) i liked this

My favorite character would have to be the guy Izzy knocked into the pool. :D
Garrett saving her was so cute, that would definitely be my favorite G/I moment.
I hope Emmy and Jake don't start dating. That would mean less E/I time, and just the thought of that is upsetting.

i think my favorite character has to be Red becasue he is soooo cute and funny. i love how Garrett saved her. i believe that Jake will be a creepy stalker and kidnap her. i also love john please update soon. one of my favorite stories of all time

I don't have a favorite character yet, but I probably will soon:).
I hope Emmy doesn't take Jake back. My prediction is she probably will, and she'll leave Izzy behind.

this is cute. i think i like john and red the best because... they just remind me perfectly of what they'd be like, the're cute!

I've only read the prologue and chapter 1 so far but i really like it=)
it's the first fan fiction i've read in like 3 years haha. and I have no idea who the guy is (garret)
Im reading beause i just absolutely love how you write!

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The adorableness of this chapter excused any sort of shortness! Unless you could possibly make more... I don't know. It doesn't matter. Ugh I just like killed myself from the sweetness in this, you have no idea.

That exerpt you gave me earlier was only a piece of how great this is!

Emmy.... she has some issues. And I loved how you portrayed her here, losing all of her cool- people make characters like her a bit often but forget to show that they're not perfect or anything you know? So you've just made Emmy completely unique because of that.
And I can't wait to see the rest of her story! What's all really going on, you know? Hopefully things will work out right for her and all, because she does deserve it.

The poetry you wrote about Izzy falling in the water.... incredible. I loved that part, bringing in Jesse and everything. So powerful.

Izzy is such an impactful character, I just can't get over it. She's so quiet, but really.... She's strong, taking other burdens on her and she really, really does care about her friends. She's not afraid to speak up to learn the story, and to learn from what goes on around her.

GARRETT SAVED HER.
He was just... so... perfect. I could puke butterflies and be happy because of this, I swear. It was adorable and sweet of him. He jumped in to save her, helped her out, helped dry her down.... Saying his name all shivering was cute, though it probably shouldn't have been as cute as I thought it was, haha
Then the last part, saying how pretty she is naturally was just... so.... I'm still melting, really. That was so sweet of him, he could see she needed some uplifting after all that drama going on. I love Garrett so much.

Another powerful and well written chapter! So beautiful, I can't wait for the next one!!

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I loved this chapter!! As usual ;)

LOL lololololol John is too funny. Seriously. Somehow I'd totally forgotten our conversations and stuff you know? And then this popped up... hahahaaheeee :D

But ugh. Oh my gosh, Emmy's birthday! He forgot his sister's BIRTHDAY. -.- Not cool. I mean, a friend to forget isn't the worst thing, but a brother, honestly? Ughhh that's horrible. And her not telling Izzy was a litle strange but whatever. :P

A party? This is going to be interesting! Wonder why Emmy wants to go, just because she wants to hang out with her brother on her birthday or something, I don't know. Hmmm.... Then Izzy gets all nervous about not knowing anyone or anything which is just kasjdfj poor girl. Lol, then Emmy wants to dress her up, yay! Hahaa....

Oh. My. Gosh.
She's bold. She gives him the dare.
The dare.
Oh. My. Gosh.
yes yes yes yes yes yes akjdsfkdsj
UPDATE you better give every detail about that party and it better be good and it'll be great and jsuta kdsjaflkdsfjdskljkj

heh :D

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Izzy gettin' bold!!!!:D

i really like this story :)

Ooh, I like her dare :)
I have a feeling that this is definitely going to lead somewhere: maybe a place where Garrett and Izzy start flirting a lot… I sure hope so.
John was a d-bag for not remember his Emmy’s birthday. I can feel her pain though. (Everyone forgets mine )
So… hmm… I haven’t much else to say except that the last chapter was very well written.

why doesn't this have more comments? i'm so confused. This is such a brilliant and well written story but it's not getting the attention it deserves! :/

I loved this chapter! You eat homemade pizza too much. I need some as well! alksfjdkfj Such good stuff, you made me miss it so... But I really enjoyed that part, the two of them baking. They talked as well, and it sort of seemed like something healing for them, you know? It really helped them... but they didn't seem to finish their conversatoin! Will it come up soon? o.0

Emmy is just incredible. And the two of them was just great to see!
Lol jeans....I feel like her a lot, as well. Haha. But that was great to have them together, building a friendship.

And their discussion! It's so hard to tell others, especially those close to you, when things aren't going right... Emmy started to realize that she could fix this- and then Izzy realized she had the same problems! I thought that was great because it's important to realize when things are wrong, so you can fix them, you know?

Very good chapter. You know, besides not bringing in Garrett.... ;)

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Gosh, it's been a while since I've commented on this baby, hasn't it?
I'd like to apologize for that so: I'm sorry :(
The ending to the last chapter was kind of sad to me. It makes my heart all gushy.

But I think the suspense of not knowing exactly what's wrong with her is distracting me more. It's good, though, that I'm not sure what's going on. At least I think. Yeah... I'll quit while I'm ahead.

PS: I still love this story :)

I love it! Can't wait for more!

She better be okay though.