Yayyyy an update! :D sort of! I'm bummed you got rid of the original two chapters, but I do really like this new one. I was curious how you were going to keep this story going, but your writing is amazing, so I figured you'd pull something phenomenal out. And you did :) no surprises there. We all giggle at the Old Cat Lady stereotype, but that's a great relatable tie to stick in there since Ronan has such a wittily advanced thought process. I've always been amazed by writers who can go on for pages with a really great story, and then you realize, physically, nothing much has really happened. That's exactly how you write! Technically speaking, all that's happened is her friend has waken her up, told her she got the job she wanted, and now she's gotta hold off on having children. I just said that in two lines. I really want to hear about this pregnancy! Update soon!
October 1st, 2011 at 09:34am