oh, you. you're such a genius, em! so, let me just point out a few things that got me keysmashing: - number one: less is more. being an architecture student (as you know), this is something I hear A LOT, since Mies van der Rohe adopted it as his motto. So it was nice to read it. - number two: the fact that Alex loves olives and Rebecca hates them. did I just spot a bit of HIMYM's olive theory-inspired writing? asjkhdjkashdkjahk puuuurrfect. - number three: AJKSHDJKLHASDHAK REBECCA'S MIDDLE NAME IS JASEY RAE?! you could've dropped a bomb right in the middle of my bedroom and I still wouldn't have been as surprised as I was when I read that. nicely played, miss, nicely played. - number four: oh you know, a little small thing called THE FACT THAT THEY WERE ALL KISSY AND TOUCHY AND STUFF on Rebecca's front porch (oh, how I love clichés. I really do, btw, I'm not being sarcastic)
and... yeah. that's about it. I've been having some craaazy weeks, with lots of essays and projects to do, but I'll message you back in a couple of days or something. I'm still here, don't worry! Awesome job (as always, dude!) :D
I'm starting to feel bad for Alex, I think he might actually really truly like her. And she's just trying to break his heart (though I have a feeling she's starting to like him more than just a friend). Love the chapter, that date was awesome, update soon please <3
I have been subscribing to this, and let me tell you, every single time I see that you updated, I literally do a happy dance and just flip the fuck out. I read the one by brittany.gaskarth and it was fine, but it lacked something. Now I realize it's because you didn't write it. I love how you flesh everything out, making it realistic. And hysterical. So in short, I love this. And am tempted to keep commenting until you update this :)
Okay, I just read this whole story in one go and I'm proud to say: I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY! It's so amazing, I love the sarcastic jokes, Jack and his amazingness, and the whole relationship/romance between Alex and Rebecca. It's beautiful. I've never seen the movie, but I know what it's about. I love all the characters in this, not just how you portray All Time Low but your original characters too. They are amazing. I am subscribing to this, I really hope to see an update soon. :D x