Maybe Holding Hands Wasn't Such a Good Idea - Comments

  • Lloyd Christmas

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    OH FUCKING GASP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    holy shiiiit
    i can't believe she asked him that !

    what's he gonna say!
    omg
    what if he says now!
    oh no!

    What's her face is fucking cuhhreeeepy!

    Holy fuck.
    fucking blew my mind

    update soon!

    miyuh
    May 19th, 2011 at 05:35am
  • bloodyvengeance

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    damn that chick is creepy but i still love your story and please make her break up with that douchebag please im begging you :)
    May 19th, 2011 at 05:32am
  • edgar allan no.

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    i'm actually having a spazz attack from being so excited for the new update today. argh! great story!
    May 19th, 2011 at 03:37am
  • slumflower

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    Loved the update! Can't wait till tiffany finds matt cheatng on her!
    May 18th, 2011 at 12:57am
  • perfectionist326

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    Gah!I'm so excited for tomorrow...in the story :3
    May 12th, 2011 at 10:16pm
  • foREVer_love

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    I seriously love that Liv is totally getting into the plan now! haha it's going to make it so much better. I can only imagine how Tiffany is going to react when she finds them.. I can't wait! :D

    Also, I just wanted to comment on the length of your chapters. It's the perfect length, not too long, but not so short that you're like.. where's the story. This story is perfect!
    May 12th, 2011 at 09:53pm
  • The_Used

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    Ok, let me rephrase this, your story is like dessert, ITS TOO DAMN GOOD! there you go! :P
    May 12th, 2011 at 04:30pm
  • The_Used

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    Ohhhh! The action is coming! I can't wait to read about Tiffany's reaction. I kindda wonder if their plan is gonna work as perfectly as they think it will.

    Once again, I did NOT want this chapter to end! Every single time I start reading your new chapters I take my time because I don't want it to end. It's so well written that you feel like you're actually feeling whatever Liv's feeling. (that's a lot of feeling lol).

    Oh and by the way, I always keep your chapters for last. Because to me, your story is like dessert! It's just too damn awesome.

    Just to get back to what's going on in the story, I love how Liv's unpredictable. Buying lingerie ;) what an awesome idea! Can't wait to see what these two will do and how Tiffany's gonna react to all that!

    Update soon, please! ^_^

    Iza a.k.a your biggest fan (lol, seriously though *straight face*)
    May 12th, 2011 at 04:28pm
  • majoji

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    I love this story! Like, for real! However, I'm scared that it's about to end soon! And I don't want that! Gah. I can't wait for 18th May, So. Loooong. *gasping desperately for air*
    May 12th, 2011 at 12:37pm
  • fictionsymphony

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    I'm always getting excited when I see a new update for this story. It's one of my favorites at the moment.
    I'm really loving the plan that Liv has cooked up at the moment. I can't wait to see what happens next chapter.
    It's really terrific.
    <3
    May 12th, 2011 at 05:16am
  • starlight886

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    I have to say this is one of my favorite stories on Mibba right now. It's extremely well written and I adore Matt and Liv together. I'm sad that the next update will be posted the day I leave for my vacation but I'm catching up as soon as I get back. :D
    May 12th, 2011 at 04:34am
  • lizicea7x

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    oh she is really gonna flip when she sees all of it.
    the part at the mall was funny and matts fear to carver
    tyler is annoying even though we dont see him much
    cant wait for tiff finding out.
    May 12th, 2011 at 03:22am
  • V-Vengeance6661

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    Just read everything in one go :) it is really good, keep it up and can't wait to read more :) (Tyler should totally walk in on them with Tiffany ;) haha)
    May 12th, 2011 at 01:31am
  • Lloyd Christmas

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    They are too freaking cute !
    Haha that vicky's secret gag was a good idea
    & I love how slick Matt thinks he is

    I can not wait until the day of reckoning !

    Ughh 8 more days
    I don't think I'll survive !

    Okay I'm done

    Miyuh
    May 12th, 2011 at 12:44am
  • bloodyvengeance

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    I really like your story and the whole plot you have going on and I was wondering did Matt choose Liv because he likes her but other than that your story is wonderful :)
    May 12th, 2011 at 12:33am
  • xlookalivesunshinex

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    AAAAAAAGH!
    I honestly can't wait!
    I dunno if i've commented before or not...but I LOVE. THIS. STORY.
    Honestly, it's probably one of my favourites :'D

    Just the whole idea :'D
    ADLKJdkajkd
    I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE :D
    May 12th, 2011 at 12:13am
  • HeatherLH9007

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    The update was amazing! I'm excited to see how everything is going to go down with Tiffany once she gets there and if rumors at school will start or not.
    May 11th, 2011 at 11:50pm
  • Hannahdoll

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    God..
    I'm scared to read about what's going to happen with Tiffany...
    lol

    Drama. Drama. Drama.
    May 11th, 2011 at 11:30pm
  • edgar allan no.

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    Hol-Ee shit this is good. better than good. i absolutely adore it. I can't wait for more!
    May 10th, 2011 at 06:48pm
  • Katelyn23

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    I am so behind on reading the updates!

    Chapter Five.
    I love the way Matt got Liv to agree to and accept the plan! I like the way they had a conversation while she cooked dinner too, especially the bit about food network. I really love the influence that Carver has on Liv and Matt. I can't wait to see if Matt spends more time around Carver soon! I'll admit that I was a little sad that they got interrupted right before they kissed, I had my fingers crossed that they would.

    My favorite part of this chapter was Kara's reaction to the food. It was absolutely hilarious!
    “And I’m getting a tattoo of Bill Cosby’s face on my butt,” I said.

    “Sounds good,” Kara said.
    Those were my two favorite lines!

    Chapter Six.
    Kara's reactions, even in Liv's dreams, are priceless! I really hope that Liv does tell Kara about the plan. I have a feeling that if Kara found out in a way other than being told she'd be pretty upset. I thought it was really funny how Matt reacted to Liv's happiness that he was late.


    “Get your mind out of the gutter, Masters,” he winked at me. “We’re keeping this strictly PG-13.”
    Brilliant line! I thought it was pretty cute that they ended up taking a nap. I wish they would just kiss already!
    May 9th, 2011 at 02:32am