Maybe Holding Hands Wasn't Such a Good Idea - Comments

  • foREVer_love

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    Yayyy for updates! lol I can't wait for the next one. I'm excited to see how Liv deals with being Matt's 'pretend' girlfriend. :D
    March 11th, 2011 at 01:11pm
  • lizicea7x

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    love it
    matt is so cute when he was asking her
    how is ty going to take it.
    more soon
    March 11th, 2011 at 08:57am
  • cookiepirate09

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    Sorry I'm commenting sooo late! I've scolded myself for you! ;) Hahah JK.
    Buuuut, ugh! I KNOW I cannot wait for the next one. The 18th? Seriously?! I'm going to diiiie! Haha.
    LA-LA-loooved Carver. And I could picture the facial expressions on Matt so well. Hahahahah, niice job.
    Also, I cant wait to see what happens at school with Liv and Matt. This... is going to be awesome. :)
    Hury hurry hurrrrryyy... lol.

    <3
    March 11th, 2011 at 08:31am
  • Psychotic Sullivan

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    Just read chapter two. Carver makes me laugh. So, so, so hard.
    I really can't wait for more. :D
    Keep up the good work, doll!
    March 7th, 2011 at 02:50pm
  • Psychotic Sullivan

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    I can't believe I didn't notice this...
    I'm glad you're finally updating again!
    Can't wait to read more!
    March 7th, 2011 at 02:35pm
  • Katelyn23

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    I love Carver! He is just ridiculously awesome! The way you described the house and Liv's room was absolutely amazing :)

    The story about how Matt and Liv met is just so freaking cute. I had a smile on my face while I was reading it.

    Matt turned to me with a smirk. “You kidding? A guy always remembers the first fight he gets into over a girl. Especially when he’s outnumbered four to one.” That part is sheer brilliance!

    I love this story so much already! I am so excited to read chapter 3 next week :)!!
    March 5th, 2011 at 05:06am
  • Katelyn23

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    This is a really awesome first chapter! I already don't like Tyler, he seems way too clingy and I'm glad that Liv is already seeing that. I really love the friendship between Liv and Kara, it feels so natural and its very entertaining :)

    You don't need to thank me! I really enjoyed getting to help you :)

    Now off to read the second chapter!
    March 5th, 2011 at 04:51am
  • hachie

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    Wow I already love the beginning!
    I look forward to more chapters and can't wait for the next update!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    March 5th, 2011 at 03:19am
  • foREVer_love

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    Awesome update!! Im really liking this story :). I also really enjoy the way you write. You give in depth details about whats going on in the story and it's really easy as a reader to paint a Picture of where everything is taking place. Keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next chapter :)
    March 4th, 2011 at 10:15pm
  • sarcasmic.x

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    Babyyyy I loved this!
    Tyler sounds like a pain already :p It's a great first chapter to start off introducing Liv and Kara's friendship. I'm soo excited to see what goes down during the car ride.
    So you need to update fucking soon! :D cause this story is gonna be the shit in no time ;)

    Ps. You're uber talented & i'm ready to obsess over another story of yours!
    Love you, babe <3
    March 4th, 2011 at 05:23pm
  • foREVer_love

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    Sooo I checked out this story like you asked me to, and I'm really glad i did! The first chapter was great. i can't wait for more! <3
    March 4th, 2011 at 02:17pm
  • cookiepirate09

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    Very nice start.
    I like how you don't jump into the guys and such.
    You actually give us insight to the characters, it's refreshing. :)
    Well, canNOT wait 'til the next one!

    <3 *subscribes*
    March 4th, 2011 at 08:39am