Sorry I'm commenting sooo late! I've scolded myself for you! ;) Hahah JK. Buuuut, ugh! I KNOW I cannot wait for the next one. The 18th? Seriously?! I'm going to diiiie! Haha. LA-LA-loooved Carver. And I could picture the facial expressions on Matt so well. Hahahahah, niice job. Also, I cant wait to see what happens at school with Liv and Matt. This... is going to be awesome. :) Hury hurry hurrrrryyy... lol.
I love Carver! He is just ridiculously awesome! The way you described the house and Liv's room was absolutely amazing :)
The story about how Matt and Liv met is just so freaking cute. I had a smile on my face while I was reading it.
Matt turned to me with a smirk. “You kidding? A guy always remembers the first fight he gets into over a girl. Especially when he’s outnumbered four to one.” That part is sheer brilliance!
I love this story so much already! I am so excited to read chapter 3 next week :)!!
This is a really awesome first chapter! I already don't like Tyler, he seems way too clingy and I'm glad that Liv is already seeing that. I really love the friendship between Liv and Kara, it feels so natural and its very entertaining :)
You don't need to thank me! I really enjoyed getting to help you :)
Wow I already love the beginning! I look forward to more chapters and can't wait for the next update!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Awesome update!! Im really liking this story :). I also really enjoy the way you write. You give in depth details about whats going on in the story and it's really easy as a reader to paint a Picture of where everything is taking place. Keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next chapter :)
Babyyyy I loved this! Tyler sounds like a pain already :p It's a great first chapter to start off introducing Liv and Kara's friendship. I'm soo excited to see what goes down during the car ride. So you need to update fucking soon! :D cause this story is gonna be the shit in no time ;)
Ps. You're uber talented & i'm ready to obsess over another story of yours! Love you, babe <3
Very nice start. I like how you don't jump into the guys and such. You actually give us insight to the characters, it's refreshing. :) Well, canNOT wait 'til the next one!