Maybe Holding Hands Wasn't Such a Good Idea - Comments

Eeeeeeeek
Tehe, she soo wants to be doing more than pretending ;)

I loved Kara's reaction! I think it was awesome the way she told Liv exactly what she thought about it instead of sugar-coating it.

I'm definitely not liking Tyler. Especially not when he tells Liv to hurry up. I also don't like the way that he just keeps talking without making sure its about something she is interested in.

I was so happy when Matt saved her from having to listen to Tyler anymore. But then again I love it when she is around Matt! I find it hilarious how afraid Matt is of Carver!


Matt sighed and looked up at me, his hazel eyes locked on my brown ones letting me know he was as serious as a heart attack in the middle of the emergency room. “I want Tiffany to catch us in bed together.” This was my favorite part! I can't wait to see how they pull it off! And I think it was the absolute perfect ending to the chapter.

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i love love love it(:
I think the chapters are amazing the length they are, a little longer maybe?
Because i like the details in them, haha.
I really hope she gets with matt (:
I can't wait for the update. (:

Great update! I love how Matt is slowly getting into Liv's head, first with being caught in bed together and then the 'practice' kissing. I love it! haha can't wait for more :D

Amazing update =) I love the longer chapters. I'm super excited for the next update, I can't wait to find out what's going to happen next.

They were so close. But then there's Tyler. -.-
I love long chapters.
I can't wait to read more :D

I love this!!!! I can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!! :D

Tehe, she is blates happy with what he wants to do ;)

i really like this story. i really want to read more. i wonder what Liv is going to say to his plan. :)

Wha?! Matt's plan is a bit out there. I wonder if she would go through with the plan, shoot I know any girl would even if it's just pretend. haha No the banner isn't horrible at all. It's actually pretty good. :D

Soo I'm pretty sure I LOVE Matt's plan hahaha :D And I thought your banner looked good!

i cant wait for more :{D
i like how youre not jumpy, its very gradual.

Awesome update I can't wait for more! I hope there is more real soon!

uhg that was a big deal
how is she going to react??
damn i really cant wait for moooore soooon

I really loved Liv's plan of escape when she was at lunch. That's something I'll have to keep in mind when I need to get out of a bad situation ASAP. Awesome update and keep up the great work!

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I love this!
Update soon!
I almost pissed my pants when he said the last time!
It's amazing(:

Ahhhhhh, you cant just leave it like that come on =[ so mean i got really into that then =D i cant wait for the next one i can tell its going to be amasing!! xx

I love the way you started this chapter! I like the way that it hints to the fact that Matt has a problem but it doesn't say what the problem is. And the "big, strong guy" part was pure gold! So was her text messages to and from Caver!

I liked how Liv knew that Kara would fall asleep, it really showed how well she knows her.

"And with that, I started to immerse myself in the blood-soaked past." I really loved that line!

I literally laughed when Matt called her boyfriend a douche. I have a feeling that before long I'll definitely be thinking of Tyler in the same way.

Tiffany is already annoying me and she definitely does seem crazy. I can not wait to see how she reacts when she finds out about Matt and Liv. I also can't wait to see how Matt's plan unfolds!

I had agreed to be Matt’s “girlfriend” to help him get rid of his real—and apparently “psychotic”—girlfriend.

And, Liv, for the record, you are pretty.

The smile remained etched on my lips as I closed my eyes. For the life of me, I really couldn’t stop smiling at the compliment Matt gave me. Only one thought entered my mind before I fell asleep: what was Kara going to say when I told her about my situation with Matt?" This was my favorite part. The way she thought about what she was going to do and then about the compliment was fantastic. I can't wait to find out what Kara says because I'm sure it will be awesome!

I'm looking forward to the next chapter! This is absolutely fantastic!

I love this story so far! I'm glad you're writing again. I loved your other story, so i'm pretty confident that this one will be just as amazing. =)

Oh my Lord, that was brilliant.
I've been on a reading spree this morning, trying to catch up with updates and stuff, while in the meantime, trying to get some ideas of my own going!

Ah, that was an amazing chapter, as usual. Just the way you described how awkward Matt was, was pretty friggen epic in itself. Not quite sure why, but your descriptions seemed to click pretty well with the overall tone this time around. Not that it doesn't always, but it did particularly well this time. Yay for updates and I can't wait for the next chapter, doll. Keep up the great work.