Everything I Used to be is Coming Back to Torture Me - Comments

I'm not really one for a 'family' story(I'm a sucker for romance xD) but I just read this start to finish and I just have to say... This was a truly lovely story :) It really warmed my heart to read through all support of Maggie, Sammy, Michelle and Brian. And that last chapter! Damnit! I have these tears pricking at the back of my eyes >.< Damn my soft heart! Damn you for making it so lovely and sweet and Clover so lovable! xD I kid. Thanks though, t'is a beautiful story ^_^

This made me so happy! The Nightmare After Christmas tour was my first concert! Baltimore, MD!

I love this fic! Is it ever going to be updated?

Chapter 21
Aw, so Maggie's rehab is finished then
Now Sammi and Clover are the ones of the friends left
Muahah xD that conversation with Sammi at the beginning was hilarious
But now Clover can finally start her training for the outside world, which is good

Chapter 22
Well at least Clover finally confided into Brian about what happened
I think that with him now knowing, he is able to help her better with coping with it
She seemed to have buried what happened deep within her, but it seemed to resurface after she got in the band

Ps. The parts where Clover talked the whole time, you always started a paragraph with quotes (the way it should be), but you never used quotes at the end of the pararaph, but then you used quotes again at the beginning of the next paragraph. Either put only quotes at the beginning of her talk and the end and none in between or add the ones that are missing =)

Moreeeeee, I neeed moreeee :D
Personally, I think the other bands should be in it a tad more, but still, MOREEEE :D

I love it :3 (Not just because my name's Samantha and my parents call me Sammi) :'D

I really don't think that even if Matt had knows about this that he would have kicked her off tour and out of the family
It would have taken too much time to look for a new drummer in the middle of the tour
If she had problems with anything, she could have gone to one of the guys and talked to them
She could have gotten all that was bothering her off her chest
Luckily Brian caught her red-handed
She's really getting into way heavier stuff
I can't wait for more
Hope you update soon :)

Clover really is making good process in the center
I mean, if they said that she'd be able to get out of there within the next month...
She really spiraled down fast, first the alcohol and then this shit
She doesn't get that it sure is Brian's business
She doesn't seem to realize that they could have easily kick her out of the band
And then she'd have nothing, no home, no friends, no nothing
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

The fact that the guys could easily kick her out of the band again cause of the shit she does, doesn't even seem to cross her mind
Although, they noticed her change in behvior once again, something like this didn't even cross their mind
The fact that she went for the hard stuff now
Can't wait to see how Matt will take what Brian has got to tell
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

Well, if clover had listened to Matt and Brian, she wouldn't have to get into therapy
She could avoided all of that, even getting into the hardcore stuff
Matt and Brian could have been stricter, cause Brian was right, she was already an alcoholic
The fact that she wanted to look less suspicious to them about her drinking just proves that
How could she have been so leger about all of this?
What if the guys had kicked her out of the band again? Because of her behaviour...
What would she have done then?
I can't wait to see what's going to happen
Hope you update soon :)

Aw, looks like Clover is making real good progress
If she was allowed visitors
I was already asking mysekf if visitors were even allowed
And if visitors are rarely allowed, then she must have made some real good progress
I really can't wait for more
Hope you update soon :)

Loved it doll! And sorry about not commenting on the last chapter I've had some issues to work through! I'll comment more promise!! Haha I can't wait for the next chapter love!

Always gonna comment, hun
Once I start reading a story and I really like it, you won't get rid of my comments ;p
So, they both noticed her dissapreaing during the day
And the times she went into the back....
I wonder what Clover will say when they approach her with this
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

I'm a subscriber and I like this chapter. I guess they didn't realize how bad it is, or they didn't do enough. Can't wait for another update!

Oh dear....her addction seemed to have come rather quickly
And she didn't even noticed it
The only one who really seemed to notice her behaving differently was Matt
The question now is though if he would talk to her about her weird behavior or not
I guess he hadn't noticed that she became quite the addict,
Can't wait for more
Hope you update soon :)

Hm, maybe Clover might be able to help Sammi
With Sammi's love for Avenged and Clover being in the band, they might get on quite well
And help each other more
Aw, at least she still has contact to the others
I really can't wait for more
Hope you update soon :)

I love it all doll! It sounds wonderful and has that sort of..... crazy twang to it!

I can't wait for some more of it dear!

Despite what Clover said sometime earlier in the story
It was kind of the guys' fault she slipped into all of this
They kinda dragged her to the bar when all she wanted to do was sleep
Especially for someone not used to alcohol at all, being around this much on tour......well we know
how it turned out
And they were urging her and stuff to take the drink
It was some hard drink
I don't know, it's just how I think about Clover's situation
I really can't wait for more
Hope you update soon :)

Aw, I freaking love Aristocats :D
Haha, slight distraction here, back to the actual comment on the story
Well, at least she found somewhat of a friend now there
Maggie seems like a lovable person
Especially now in a time where she goes through withdrawal
And it seems like her first concert went really well
I really can't wait for more
Hope you update soon :)

Aw, it really eems that she really bonded with the guys, especially with Brian and Michelle
I mean, they took her in and everything
She realy became a part of the family
I really can't wait to see what's going to happen on tour
I can't wait for more
Hope you update soon :)

I really loved this update. It showed how the bond between Clover and everyone, especially Brian and Michelle, has grown so much and that they want her to see that they see her as part of the family. I can't wait to see what happens once they're out on tour :)

Wonderful as always hun xxx