Everything I Used to be is Coming Back to Torture Me - Comments

Hm, I had kinda figured that it was actually the guys' spot
That they never ran into each other before was sheer coincidence though
She went there for a few years already to excape her foster parents
And of course, the guys always went there too, just not at the same time as her
Aw, Brian came and found her
And he even took her in, despite not knowing her really
This clearly shows that there are still people out there that do care for her
I really can't wait for more
Hope you update soon :)

Awww, Brian to the rescue :D As soon as I started reading the description of where Clover was going to spend the night I knew it was "The Spot". And having Brian show up like that and letting her know that she was important to all of them, and that they wouldn't let anything happen to her was wonderful. She needs to know that whilst her foster parents may not seem to, there are people out there that care for her.

I loved it hun and Iook forward to see what happens next :) xx

So, she's finally going into rehab
It's probably for the best
She really needs help
Although the guys would try to help her out of this
She needs professional help with this
And as they came just to see her off when she was driven to the center, shows how much she means to then
I really can't wait for more
Hope you update soon :)

Awwww, I'm so glad she 's going in to rehab and getting the help that she needs. And the fact that everyone came to see her off, it just shows how much she means to them after such a short time.

Loved it as always, can't wait for the next update :) xx

Now that's taking your religious beliefs to a whole new extreme. Poor Clover being punished that way, and then for Stephen to burn her drums. I get the feeling that Patricia knew nothing about that with how she was when Clover returned. But she's done the right thing, she can't stay in a household like that. I have a feeling the band will rally round her and help her when they find out just what's happened.

I really can't wait to see what's going to happen next, I loved it :) xx

No joke, I was getting seriously angry when Stephen and Patricia went on about them being satanists and stuff
What the fuck is their problem
Taking all of her Cds and then Stephen had the nerve to burn her drums....grr
She shouldn't have told them the truth in the first place
She should have just kept that to herself
Her leaving that household was the right thing to do in this moment
I really can't wait for more
Hope you update soon :)

What an ass that drummer was for saying that Clover only got as far as she did because of her looks rather than her talent...guess she showed him how wrong he was though when she played :) And I loved how Zacky basically let it slip he thought she was the best when he didn't know she was in the room...nice one!

Really look forward to more soon hun :) xx

Aww, she really already gave up hope there for a moment
But then she received the phone call
Aww, Arin xD <3 (sorry, this had to be right now, haha)
Can't wait for more
Hope you update soon :)

Hm, the guys seemed to be caught off guard by her playing
And it must have been quite nerve wrecking for her
But she really managed to sit through this
Playing even difficult songs
Really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

That sounded like one of the most nerve-racking things anyone would have to do! But I'm so glad Clover was able to sit there and play the drums effortlessly...she seemed to catch them a little off-guard with that :)

I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes hun :) xx

You should really keep it
I really like it so far, it sounds really interesting
Can't wait to see where this will go
Hope you update soon :)

I really like this so far, so for me it's a keeper!! And welcome back to writing :) xx

I love the concept of this so far. :)

Keep it!
I like it so far, and look forward to see what happens next :)
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