I'm digging this 'updating every two days' thing as well(:
Okay, ever since I started watching this show (and scary movies in general) I always wonder about the psychological well-being of the characters, and I think you portray the psychological trauma of being attacked by something supernatural, especially in a young kid, really well. And that is my second favorite thing about this story.
hehe "old hag" idk man hearing that just makes me laugh, even though this chapter was pretty heavy, but I can't wait to get to Devon's chapters because what the balls is going to happen!? Update soon!
So, I don't think I ever told you how much I absolutely adored this story. Like I've never seen anyone keep Dean so in character in a story like this before. I really like Devon's character, as well. I'm also really interested in the case you've written Dean to work, I really can't wait to see how this story plays out!
I love this story already and I've (and others) been patiently waiting for eight months now. it would be awesome if you could bring this story back to life :)
Just read this and i am fucking ised at Adele. not gunna lie she's a bitch and I ant to murder her. And I don't get emotional very often in tory but this one just tore open my chest and let my heart die on the ground. and I think you're doing great with Dean. i really enjoy reading from his P.O.V :) Hope you update soon!