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I love this story. Originally, I was looking for something more of the Disney Hades with some naughty stuff thrown in. But this? Oh my Gods, this is the most amazing OCish Hades I've ever seen!

O.O Do you mind separating the paragraphs in chapter 5? It's like...block central.

The beginning of that letter made me snort. And I do not snort on a daily basis so bravo. I can already tell that this is going to be a great read. :) Oh em gee, I know what H stands for! I'm so smart.
Usually I would be annoyed if someone repeatedly used one word multiple times but the attitude of the main character just makes it work. I love her name by the way.
The ending of the first chapter is just...Ha. I love the way you wrote this! Aw I love Rudy! The way she met him was just so cute and funny at the same time. :0
Oh my gosh, Mr. H and Tawny's bookstore encounter! Gah! I just love the way you write!
You know what I'm going to keep reading and stop commenting on every chapter (no need to spoil it for others!).
But you are a great writer and this is an awesome story!

Dude, the way you ended chapter three was epic! And hilarious.

I love this. I love you. That's awkward. But this is beyond brilliant, and lord. What planet are you from? How do you write??? I don't even know right now. The last chapter you've got posted I quite literally found myself screaming at the computer OH GOD SHE DIDN'T JUST OH GOD (mind you I'm house sitting for a friend so I'm completely alone here with the exception of a few animals that include a one-eyed dog and a cat that resembles and alien and acts like it crawled from the depths of hell). God. I adore your characterization skills; you're truly brilliant. Lord, this story is just so fun and fresh and my goodness you're just lovely! I can't wait to see what else you've got coming!!

I'm thinkin that Captain isn't just a homeless man. . He really reminds me of Posideon. ( I totally butchered the spelling of his name). Holy moly, I don't really envision 'H' like he looks in the picture, I see him much, much sexier (if that's possible) Uhh, this story is top three that I have ever read on mibba. You have all these AMAZING and heartfelt comments about your story, yet you haven't updated in months!! C'mon, update!! Make my day, because I am irrevocably and completely in love with your story!! Your characters have so much originality and it really shines through. So, therefore, I award you with an A (when you update you'll get an A+). So, Yeahh. UPDATE!!!!! :D

New Mibba helped me in discovering this beautiful story. I'm in deep love with it.(I know, creepy right?) Ehh I could care less. Anyways, I've also had a little something for Hades when in the Greek Mythology Period. Phase would actually be the more accurate term but why does that matter? So, this story easily gripped me into a strange obsession. Which leads me to the request that I'd greatly appreciate if you updated soon. :)

So, please?

New Mibba helped me in discovering this beautiful story. I'm in deep love with it.(I know, creepy right?) Ehh I could care less. Anyways, I've also had a little something for Hades when in the Greek Mythology Period. Phase would actually be the more accurate term but why does that matter? So, this story easily gripped me into a strange obsession. Which leads me to the request that I'd greatly appreciate if you updated soon. :)

So, please?

:)

The friend zone has a new occupant, thy name is hades... haha

I fear I will sound repetitive with this comment, as I probably haven't said something new or different than other people, but my goodness this story is just incredible beyond words. The word flow and just the idea in general...It's all so amazing. You could be published. Without a doubt, you could be.
Keep writing.
<3

Awesome!

I really love the way you write ^^
You can tell that it's your own personality in the language, you aren't trying to copy anyone or anything else. It makes a great story line all the more brilliant :D

This is brilliant :D
Write more, I command ye! (Or i ask politely, whichever will actually work)

So I'm just going to combine the rest of my comments into this one, individual comment so as not to be weird/creepy.

The whole intro. part of chapter two was just...so unique to me. Her view on being an artist and how she creates and such...I really, really loved that. Also, I just love Mr. H. already, which is making me feel concerned. hahahaha.

Ok, then chapter three started and I, like Tawny, got this really nervous feeling in my gut because obviously some weird shit was going on. Plus, the fact that she was now calling him "H" just made me giggle for some reason.

And thennnnn I feel this attraction to H, of course, which makes me believe that all three of us (you, Tawny, and I) have a twisted nature to us for being attracted to Satan/making him so sexy.

Oh, and another side note, I really like the skulls on the top. Very appropriate, I think, for whatever reason.

Also, you're quite good at writing scary scenes, because I had no idea what was going to happen to Tawny and I almost didn't want to keep reading in case she got catapulted into hell or something.

Now that I am officially caught up, I'm able to say, "Please! More!" Seriously though, Isis. This story is amazing, and I really need to know what's gonna happennnnn.

Oh, and sorry for this crazily lengthy comment. But it's very lovely story, and so I thought it deserved an equally thought out comment :)

So this is just a comment based upon the first chapter, which I have just read, and I must say...wow, Isis! I'm already so intrigued, and I'm fairly certain that I'll finished up all of the other chapters later this evening. Your writing is so exquisite and refreshing, and I'm gonna creep on ya a bit more tonight

"Moxie" Gotta love the homeless people. Awesome chapter!! Update Soon!!!

Oh hey, that's right. He's got a wife. I mean... she's only around six months of the year, but whatever, marriage by pomegranate entrapment is still marriage.
This is an awesome story. More soon pleeeeease!

Amazing, brilliant, spectacular, fabulous, explosive, creative, eloquent, lovely...
That list could go on for about three years, I think.
Wow, I absolutely adore this story. Your writing style is simply incredible, and your twist on Greek myth is really very interesting.
I can't wait to read more! I'm so insanely pleased that I found this <3
Wonderful.