Getting Back To Insanity - Comments

Wow.
The summary itself kind of pulled me in, making me want to read more.
And the prologue! Please, write more, this sounds so good!

Immediate reaction upon reading: Oh. Wow. :O Excellent! Love it!

It's so short right now, but it draws the reader in immediately! Right from the summary, I was hooked. The tone and the style seem rather unique, the title is cool, and the whole theme so far is just captivating. Paranoid schizophrenia... quite a topic! I can't wait to see where you're going to take this! Definitely continue on with this story. You're a wonderful writer! :D

Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

First, I want to say how much I love the banner. It was very well done, overall(: lovely, lovely, lovely.

I liked how you started it with a [well-known] quote, and tied it into the prologue. It was also an interesting choice to have it seem like the main character was speaking to the readers. Nicely done.

Update soon!(:

Wow..
First off love the layout
The summary is good, it had me right away, making me want to read more
I like the title, it caught my eye, so I knew this was going to be good.
Even though its short, I'm hook. I really like this.
I can' wait to read more :)

aha my spelling in the first line is a fail lol

I really like where this is heaidnga nd the layout is great.

Over all it reminds me of the Tell tale heart by Poe because in that story the main character was insane yet he said no my disease has only made me more cunning, more wise, more cautious, it has heightened my senses I'm not insane fore I can tell you the story in great patience. This has a similar feel to it =] which is good.

I claimed this, completely forgetting I had already. My apologies.

However, I will encourage you greatly to update. I want to read more. I'm impatient.

I was not expecting that at all for a prologue! It was brilliant! The banner and layout made everything easy to read. So I am going to subscribe and I can't wait until the next chapter! :)

This most certainly has my attention already. It's interesting and the beginning holds a lot of potential. I adore the layout, it really suits the mood. I honestly can't wait to read more of this. It's fantastic so far.

This is certainly interesting...I'm not entirely sure how I feel about it though. It's definitely a different piece, one I've yet to find on here. While the concept of insanity is something that is often toyed with, especially on Mibba--this is certainly a new approach.

I can see this being twisted and wonderful and everything I adore!

It reminds me of this one thing my dad always says: In the insane world the sane person appears insane.. Which is in fact kind of what the first little snipped was about.

I love how you've wrapped that little drabble around a quote, everything made sense in its own weird quirky little way. It made my day.

Watch your spacing, all paragraphs should have a line between them.

<3

This one, right?
Before I go on... *subscription*
So are we going to hear the many adventures of said insanee? I want to read aout them, desperately. When it comes to maniacs and schizo preniacs (schizo maniacs) I'm always interested.

This is definitely interesting. The summary was not confusing, though it did have perplexed at the beginning. But that's what good about it. It keeps you thinking, wearing out the possibilities of what the story is going to be about, which I think is fabulous, seeing as I do love stories that keep me glued to my seat. This looks like one of them. The prologue was also very intriguing. I found myself wanting to search for this...Mary something too.

p.s., I love that you defined the word 'insanity.' It really is just a word to some of us compared to the real meaning.

I think I'll subscribe. :)

So, your layout is absolutely f*cking gorgeous! It's just askjlkjlsj I want it haha. I love the background and stuff.

I can't say much because you've only got a short prologue, but it's very interesting. Like, it makes me want to know why this person is going to be celebrated. Why I would be put in a straight jacket, and why the narrator hasn't been put into one yet.

I'm subscribing (:

Short, but as they say, short and sweet.
I'm already enjoying this, and I'm very interested. It grabbed my interest straight away
Sorry for not commenting straight away; I was out!
Anyway, I shall subscribe. I hope to see more soon!<3

Short, sweet, and to the point. First off, the banner and layout blend perfectly and help set the mood. There aren't any elements in them that would draw the reader away from the story. I like how while writing in the first person point of view you also address the reader directly, it really draws them in. The simplicity of the chapter leaves little to the imagination but it makes the reader wonder. What's going to happen next? Where is this story going?

Now I'm the one you want to put in a straitjacket, right? Think again; better people then you have tried.

I was already enjoying the chapter even though it was short but those sentences made my day. I like that you added a taunting matter. I did see one grammar mistake before that but it was anything major, just a little thing. Overall, this is a very nice beginning, I'm interested in seeing where it goes.

"your fuutre" should be "your future"

Very interesting little story. I can't wait to read more. I feel that a sane person trapped in an insane world. I feel this is a concept that has not been explored in media to any good degree. This entire story just intrigues me greatly, and I commend you.

Wow, you are an AMAZING writer! And I love this story so far! Somehow, I must agree with the quote you used. It may be messed up, but there are a lot of messed up people in our world. In a way, it is true though. How do we know we won't be caught if we don't jump, take a risk? I don't think I've ever read a story quite like this either. It makes perfect sense but at the same time no sense at all. It contradicts itself but in an appealing manner. Great great work :) *subscribe*

Comment Virginity! Alright so it made me a little sad that there wasn't a layout for this story. But beside that I really like the prologue and just how it interacts with the reader. I really like the quote that you choose too. I haven't heard it before, but I like it very much. I also liked the whole little bit that came after this quote. I really want to read more now!