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  • Oceanid.

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    Oh my gosh.... Jared must be the one who went missing! And this killer/kidnapper is a total creep. How the heck would he know what Jared does and dosen't want?

    All in all, very intriguing. :)
    April 26th, 2011 at 11:53pm
  • Painted Bones.

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    A teeeeeny bit confusing at times, but in a good way :) And also very intriguing.

    :) A great update
    April 26th, 2011 at 11:00pm
  • NothinNNomore

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    Ohmygosh. Who's missing??
    April 26th, 2011 at 12:51am
  • Oceanid.

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    Holy... who's missing?!

    Plus, yay for Jude being momentarily safe!
    April 25th, 2011 at 11:00pm
  • Painted Bones.

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    A missing person? Holy crap O_O
    Great update!
    April 25th, 2011 at 09:45pm
  • Oceanid.

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    Okay, now I like Jude more than Christian -_- Also, holy cow Jude's a paitient too? This story keeps getting better and better with the things that I don't expect. Great job!
    April 25th, 2011 at 02:19am
  • tiffany danielle

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    One good thing about missing updates is your cliff hangers aren't as hangy. You writing is so amazing I think it'd kill me if I had to wait and find out what was up with that letter, you know? Son = brother = never see you again = father? o: I'm uber, uber curious.

    This was an awesome chapter. :) <3
    April 22nd, 2011 at 06:08am
  • Rbucky

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    This is so excellent! I have no idea what's going to happen. It's so suspenseful!
    April 22nd, 2011 at 12:12am
  • Painted Bones.

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    O_O wonder why Jude is a patient...
    April 21st, 2011 at 11:54pm
  • NothinNNomore

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    Kinda short, but still good :)
    April 21st, 2011 at 07:21pm
  • NothinNNomore

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    I hope she reads the letter soon.
    April 21st, 2011 at 05:59am
  • MixMatch

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    Holy Fadoodle. I love this story. It's so creepy and there's a great balance between horror and romance. I can't wait for the next update. Christian makes me think he's killing the people but, that's just me.
    April 20th, 2011 at 07:12pm
  • Painted Bones.

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    I suddenly find myself pro-Jude...

    What's Christian's problem?

    Anyway, great chapter :)
    April 20th, 2011 at 03:37am
  • Oceanid.

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    Well, I am looking forward to the dark scary stuff but the romancey stuff is cute! Kendall and Christian are adorable. :)
    April 19th, 2011 at 12:47am
  • Painted Bones.

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    I love the "If only I had known..." things :D it adds so much extra suspense.
    PLEASE update soon:)
    April 18th, 2011 at 11:52pm
  • Oceanid.

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    Oh dear... what's going to happen tgo Kendall now?
    April 16th, 2011 at 01:38am
  • NothinNNomore

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    Wait, she has a brother or something???
    April 15th, 2011 at 06:09am
  • Painted Bones.

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    Oh my goodness O_O I open with that a lot, but seriously...
    First of all, I'm sorry but her mom is a b!tch. Second of all: HOLY CRAP WHAT WAS THAT PAPER ABOUT?!
    April 15th, 2011 at 04:48am
  • Honeybear

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    Good chapter. Update soon<3
    April 9th, 2011 at 03:45am
  • Oceanid.

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    Oh my gosh...

    I'm glad Kendall and Christian are still doing alright, though I'm starting to wonder how long it'll last as he seemed to annoy her when he called her by her last name.

    With the dreams/nightmares possibly not being her's? Yeah, super creepy. So I'm guessing either she's creeping around unconciously in someone's mind or someone's creeping around in her's.

    Jude, this wouldn't happen to be your fault would it? Cause I'm getting the bad vibe again and the bad vibe came with Jude.
    April 5th, 2011 at 11:32pm
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