March 2nd, 2008 at 06:00pm
Hate Letters - Comments
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yeah well I'm sorry I didn't update for ages but I hope you enjoy the recent chap!- MJLS:
- judging by that PS at the end of this chapter, I really don't like her now. Damn, this story is good :D can't wait to read more, update as soon as you can ^.^
March 2nd, 2008 at 05:59pm -
How dare she?!? I can't believe the balls of that bitch! [figurative, of course]
Poor Gee. I miss Skyler too. I miss that ball-sy girl.
I think our profiles are gay. Because I called my profile a 'he' and you called yours a 'he' also lol. Wow. It's boy-profile-sex!February 23rd, 2008 at 07:30am -
How dare she?!? I can't believe the balls of that bitch! [figurative, of course]
Poor Gee. I miss Skyler too.February 23rd, 2008 at 07:29am -
how can she cheat on gee??????????????????????? and wow gee has gone nutsFebruary 22nd, 2008 at 09:50pm
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Well, you either cheated or you didn't. There is no 'I think' when it comes to that.
Humph. I can't believe I am actually going to write this but, I don't blame her if she did.
Gerard is only being faithful in real life, but not mentally.
I'm not saying he's having dirty dreams or anything but he loves her way more, or so it seems, then Kylie.February 21st, 2008 at 11:47pm -
she thinks she cheated??? shouldnt she know that xd
my guess it was ron ^^February 21st, 2008 at 05:30pm -
judging by that PS at the end of this chapter, I really don't like her now. Damn, this story is good :D can't wait to read more, update as soon as you can ^.^February 21st, 2008 at 04:22pm
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my profiles heart flutters when he sees your profile...- Dr. Acula:
Yes indeedio, sequels are a bitch. but the one I just started is going really well...it's almost writing itself!- magical_tragedy:
ah sequels are a pain in the ass to come up with, I tried out 4 versions with different charechters and plots before I came up with this one.- Dr. Acula:
- I've never really done a good sequel. I just ended one because it seemed like the story line was kind of dragging on and on.....and on....and on. So I made everything okay so the characters got their happy ending and I got to stop coming up with shit to write it.
You are very welcome- I do love this story and I'm so happy you updated! I think I'm going to read the first one again....I just loved it so so much!
Okay, okay profile! I'll tell her! *sigh* my profile says that it still loves yours.
My profile asked me to tell your profile to meet it tonight at 10...please pass the message!
My profile accepts and he says, be there or be square!!!
February 21st, 2008 at 03:52pm -
Aw it takes a while to like certain people.- alternachick08:
- go gee! kylie still dont like you
February 21st, 2008 at 03:51pm -
I guess she's hating Sky when things go particularly wrong for her and Gee- MJLS:
- wow, this chapter was different from the others since it was more about her life than her words against Skyler. I liked this ^.^ keep up your good work and update as soon as you can
February 21st, 2008 at 03:50pm -
lol there's misery all around.- Umbrella Pwnage:
- Gah!
I think she deserves some friends. I kinda like her now so I'm pretty biased.
Gerard is really screwed up though. He should have been committed a while back.
Poor guy.
And poor Kylie.
February 21st, 2008 at 03:49pm -
Your point (all of them) is taken and so does your list of things, I really have to consider what I'm doing with this, right now I'm just waiting for an idea to hit me like they usually do.- Elle:
- He found my letters.
I loved that sentence. How it opened and just hung there a second. It made me go *gasp* and then get flooded with thoughts. (on a seperate note, it couldve been a very effective cliffhanger if it was twisted slightly) (you know me always giving you cliffhanger pointers.lol) But have you considered ending a letter like that? Like with some big announcement (Im pregnant, or ron is on the phone gotta go) Or something like that?
But I loved it at the beginning too. It was the opposite of a cliffhanger cause it was at the beginning so it was more of a hook. and it was great. I couldnt wait to read the rest to see how it went down.
Its also sorta funny how shes writing to sky like blah blah hes so crazy thinking of you like that, but yet shes the one writing letters like theyre friends (robs point btw but I kinda agree)
Also this letter again has less hate. Which is good. She really has no reason to 'hate' sky. Maybe dislike her, be a little jealous. but hate? noooo
such a strong word.
Letters to sky is starting to become her diary in a way.I wonder if she sees this?
Also, something has to happen to bring her and gee close and like quick, otherwise what was the point of this? It would be a story about a failed relationship and no one wants that. Im gonna message you something. brb.
xoxo
February 21st, 2008 at 03:48pm -
Yes indeedio, sequels are a bitch. but the one I just started is going really well...it's almost writing itself!- magical_tragedy:
ah sequels are a pain in the ass to come up with, I tried out 4 versions with different charechters and plots before I came up with this one.- Dr. Acula:
- I've never really done a good sequel. I just ended one because it seemed like the story line was kind of dragging on and on.....and on....and on. So I made everything okay so the characters got their happy ending and I got to stop coming up with shit to write it.
You are very welcome- I do love this story and I'm so happy you updated! I think I'm going to read the first one again....I just loved it so so much!
Okay, okay profile! I'll tell her! *sigh* my profile says that it still loves yours.
My profile asked me to tell your profile to meet it tonight at 10...please pass the message!
My profile accepts and he says, be there or be square!!!February 18th, 2008 at 11:16pm -
go gee! kylie still dont like youFebruary 15th, 2008 at 05:15pm
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wow, this chapter was different from the others since it was more about her life than her words against Skyler. I liked this ^.^ keep up your good work and update as soon as you canFebruary 15th, 2008 at 04:22pm
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Gah!
I think she deserves some friends. I kinda like her now so I'm pretty biased.
Gerard is really screwed up though. He should have been committed a while back.
Poor guy.
And poor Kylie.February 15th, 2008 at 04:07pm -
He found my letters.
I loved that sentence. How it opened and just hung there a second. It made me go *gasp* and then get flooded with thoughts. (on a seperate note, it couldve been a very effective cliffhanger if it was twisted slightly) (you know me always giving you cliffhanger pointers.lol) But have you considered ending a letter like that? Like with some big announcement (Im pregnant, or ron is on the phone gotta go) Or something like that?
But I loved it at the beginning too. It was the opposite of a cliffhanger cause it was at the beginning so it was more of a hook. and it was great. I couldnt wait to read the rest to see how it went down.
Its also sorta funny how shes writing to sky like blah blah hes so crazy thinking of you like that, but yet shes the one writing letters like theyre friends (robs point btw but I kinda agree)
Also this letter again has less hate. Which is good. She really has no reason to 'hate' sky. Maybe dislike her, be a little jealous. but hate? noooo
such a strong word.
Letters to sky is starting to become her diary in a way.I wonder if she sees this?
Also, something has to happen to bring her and gee close and like quick, otherwise what was the point of this? It would be a story about a failed relationship and no one wants that. Im gonna message you something. brb.
xoxoFebruary 15th, 2008 at 03:29pm -
lol well i dont mind being stuck with your story till next year. but if you gonna end it next week, it hopefully means that you start with a new one.. ^^ a loooooog one again. and of course there is still your other story, hehe
omg he found her letters and is she really going to call ron? uhhh exciting.February 15th, 2008 at 03:07pm -
My thank you for the quick recap of the story.- Elle:
- Ah Elle wont be reviewing you tonight. I know you are disappointed. But a review from me is better then no review is it not?
I am curious as to how you are selecting your dates. November 19th? Odd coincidence perhaps? Perhaps its all a coincidence.
A story of a lover, standing in for another. A person who wont let go of a ghost and the pain it causes the one who is watching. Perhaps if nothing else it will bring new perspective to an old issue. I urge you to continue on.
"A rose with out thorns is like love with out heartbreak; it doesn't make sense."
RB
February 15th, 2008 at 02:32pm