Hate Letters - Comments

  • Eyeliner stains

    Eyeliner stains (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    35
    Location:
    Canada
    FrancyPansy:
    she thinks she cheated??? shouldnt she know that xd

    my guess it was ron ^^
    I guess she's confused.
    March 2nd, 2008 at 06:00pm
  • Eyeliner stains

    Eyeliner stains (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    35
    Location:
    Canada
    MJLS:
    judging by that PS at the end of this chapter, I really don't like her now. Damn, this story is good :D can't wait to read more, update as soon as you can ^.^
    yeah well I'm sorry I didn't update for ages but I hope you enjoy the recent chap!
    March 2nd, 2008 at 05:59pm
  • Rat Head

    Rat Head (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    How dare she?!? I can't believe the balls of that bitch! [figurative, of course]

    Poor Gee. I miss Skyler too. I miss that ball-sy girl.

    I think our profiles are gay. Because I called my profile a 'he' and you called yours a 'he' also lol. Wow. It's boy-profile-sex!
    February 23rd, 2008 at 07:30am
  • Rat Head

    Rat Head (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    How dare she?!? I can't believe the balls of that bitch! [figurative, of course]

    Poor Gee. I miss Skyler too.
    February 23rd, 2008 at 07:29am
  • Alice Verney

    Alice Verney (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    how can she cheat on gee??????????????????????? and wow gee has gone nuts
    February 22nd, 2008 at 09:50pm
  • Umbrella Pwnage

    Umbrella Pwnage (250)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    Well, you either cheated or you didn't. There is no 'I think' when it comes to that.
    Humph. I can't believe I am actually going to write this but, I don't blame her if she did.
    Gerard is only being faithful in real life, but not mentally.
    I'm not saying he's having dirty dreams or anything but he loves her way more, or so it seems, then Kylie.
    February 21st, 2008 at 11:47pm
  • FrancyPansy

    FrancyPansy (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    36
    Location:
    Austria
    she thinks she cheated??? shouldnt she know that xd

    my guess it was ron ^^
    February 21st, 2008 at 05:30pm
  • MJLS

    MJLS (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    Belgium
    judging by that PS at the end of this chapter, I really don't like her now. Damn, this story is good :D can't wait to read more, update as soon as you can ^.^
    February 21st, 2008 at 04:22pm
  • Eyeliner stains

    Eyeliner stains (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    35
    Location:
    Canada
    Dr. Acula:
    magical_tragedy:
    Dr. Acula:
    I've never really done a good sequel. I just ended one because it seemed like the story line was kind of dragging on and on.....and on....and on. So I made everything okay so the characters got their happy ending and I got to stop coming up with shit to write it.

    You are very welcome- I do love this story and I'm so happy you updated! I think I'm going to read the first one again....I just loved it so so much!

    Okay, okay profile! I'll tell her! *sigh* my profile says that it still loves yours.
    ah sequels are a pain in the ass to come up with, I tried out 4 versions with different charechters and plots before I came up with this one.

    My profile asked me to tell your profile to meet it tonight at 10...please pass the message!
    Yes indeedio, sequels are a bitch. but the one I just started is going really well...it's almost writing itself!

    My profile accepts and he says, be there or be square!!!
    my profiles heart flutters when he sees your profile...
    February 21st, 2008 at 03:52pm
  • Eyeliner stains

    Eyeliner stains (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    35
    Location:
    Canada
    alternachick08:
    go gee! kylie still dont like you
    Aw it takes a while to like certain people.
    February 21st, 2008 at 03:51pm
  • Eyeliner stains

    Eyeliner stains (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    35
    Location:
    Canada
    MJLS:
    wow, this chapter was different from the others since it was more about her life than her words against Skyler. I liked this ^.^ keep up your good work and update as soon as you can
    I guess she's hating Sky when things go particularly wrong for her and Gee
    February 21st, 2008 at 03:50pm
  • Eyeliner stains

    Eyeliner stains (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    35
    Location:
    Canada
    Umbrella Pwnage:
    Gah!
    I think she deserves some friends. I kinda like her now so I'm pretty biased.
    Gerard is really screwed up though. He should have been committed a while back.
    Poor guy.
    And poor Kylie.
    lol there's misery all around.
    February 21st, 2008 at 03:49pm
  • Eyeliner stains

    Eyeliner stains (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    35
    Location:
    Canada
    Elle:
    He found my letters.

    I loved that sentence. How it opened and just hung there a second. It made me go *gasp* and then get flooded with thoughts. (on a seperate note, it couldve been a very effective cliffhanger if it was twisted slightly) (you know me always giving you cliffhanger pointers.lol) But have you considered ending a letter like that? Like with some big announcement (Im pregnant, or ron is on the phone gotta go) Or something like that?

    But I loved it at the beginning too. It was the opposite of a cliffhanger cause it was at the beginning so it was more of a hook. and it was great. I couldnt wait to read the rest to see how it went down.
    Its also sorta funny how shes writing to sky like blah blah hes so crazy thinking of you like that, but yet shes the one writing letters like theyre friends (robs point btw but I kinda agree)
    Also this letter again has less hate. Which is good. She really has no reason to 'hate' sky. Maybe dislike her, be a little jealous. but hate? noooo
    such a strong word.
    Letters to sky is starting to become her diary in a way.I wonder if she sees this?
    Also, something has to happen to bring her and gee close and like quick, otherwise what was the point of this? It would be a story about a failed relationship and no one wants that. Im gonna message you something. brb.
    xoxo
    Your point (all of them) is taken and so does your list of things, I really have to consider what I'm doing with this, right now I'm just waiting for an idea to hit me like they usually do.
    February 21st, 2008 at 03:48pm
  • Rat Head

    Rat Head (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    magical_tragedy:
    Dr. Acula:
    I've never really done a good sequel. I just ended one because it seemed like the story line was kind of dragging on and on.....and on....and on. So I made everything okay so the characters got their happy ending and I got to stop coming up with shit to write it.

    You are very welcome- I do love this story and I'm so happy you updated! I think I'm going to read the first one again....I just loved it so so much!

    Okay, okay profile! I'll tell her! *sigh* my profile says that it still loves yours.
    ah sequels are a pain in the ass to come up with, I tried out 4 versions with different charechters and plots before I came up with this one.

    My profile asked me to tell your profile to meet it tonight at 10...please pass the message!
    Yes indeedio, sequels are a bitch. but the one I just started is going really well...it's almost writing itself!

    My profile accepts and he says, be there or be square!!!
    February 18th, 2008 at 11:16pm
  • Alice Verney

    Alice Verney (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    go gee! kylie still dont like you
    February 15th, 2008 at 05:15pm
  • MJLS

    MJLS (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    Belgium
    wow, this chapter was different from the others since it was more about her life than her words against Skyler. I liked this ^.^ keep up your good work and update as soon as you can
    February 15th, 2008 at 04:22pm
  • Umbrella Pwnage

    Umbrella Pwnage (250)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    Gah!
    I think she deserves some friends. I kinda like her now so I'm pretty biased.
    Gerard is really screwed up though. He should have been committed a while back.
    Poor guy.
    And poor Kylie.
    February 15th, 2008 at 04:07pm
  • mibbba

    mibbba (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    43
    Location:
    United States
    He found my letters.

    I loved that sentence. How it opened and just hung there a second. It made me go *gasp* and then get flooded with thoughts. (on a seperate note, it couldve been a very effective cliffhanger if it was twisted slightly) (you know me always giving you cliffhanger pointers.lol) But have you considered ending a letter like that? Like with some big announcement (Im pregnant, or ron is on the phone gotta go) Or something like that?

    But I loved it at the beginning too. It was the opposite of a cliffhanger cause it was at the beginning so it was more of a hook. and it was great. I couldnt wait to read the rest to see how it went down.
    Its also sorta funny how shes writing to sky like blah blah hes so crazy thinking of you like that, but yet shes the one writing letters like theyre friends (robs point btw but I kinda agree)
    Also this letter again has less hate. Which is good. She really has no reason to 'hate' sky. Maybe dislike her, be a little jealous. but hate? noooo
    such a strong word.
    Letters to sky is starting to become her diary in a way.I wonder if she sees this?
    Also, something has to happen to bring her and gee close and like quick, otherwise what was the point of this? It would be a story about a failed relationship and no one wants that. Im gonna message you something. brb.
    xoxo
    February 15th, 2008 at 03:29pm
  • FrancyPansy

    FrancyPansy (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    36
    Location:
    Austria
    lol well i dont mind being stuck with your story till next year. but if you gonna end it next week, it hopefully means that you start with a new one.. ^^ a loooooog one again. and of course there is still your other story, hehe

    omg he found her letters and is she really going to call ron? uhhh exciting.
    February 15th, 2008 at 03:07pm
  • Eyeliner stains

    Eyeliner stains (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    35
    Location:
    Canada
    Elle:
    Ah Elle wont be reviewing you tonight. I know you are disappointed. But a review from me is better then no review is it not?
    I am curious as to how you are selecting your dates. November 19th? Odd coincidence perhaps? Perhaps its all a coincidence.
    A story of a lover, standing in for another. A person who wont let go of a ghost and the pain it causes the one who is watching. Perhaps if nothing else it will bring new perspective to an old issue. I urge you to continue on.
    "A rose with out thorns is like love with out heartbreak; it doesn't make sense."
    RB
    My thank you for the quick recap of the story.
    February 15th, 2008 at 02:32pm