@Solitude_: Thaaaanks. I try lol :P @Livi12396: Again, thank you! :D It makes me unbelievably happy to hear someone say that!! @AHLICE: Gah, I know. It's so goddamn personal, which is why it can be so hard to write. It's makes be both happy and sad that other people can identify with it..
Nick would fall asleep like this if he could, but in a few minutes Jamie’s going to push him off and wrap the sheets around himself in a cocoon because there’s only so much intimacy he can take.
I really enjoyed that sentence, though it also seems sad too.
I don't get why there aren't any comments here, 'cause this is rad >:c I also don't know why, but I really liked chapter 13. Just the way it was worded -- I keep rereading it. Actually, I lied, everything is great.