Descent - Comments

looooooooooooove it darling! :) absolutely gorgeous! almost cried ;)

I absolutely adore this... Please update!

Awww thanks for the dedication chica, I'm so flattered. I feel so horrible for Sergio, not being able to play again and I could imagine what Iker was like to hear that one of his closest friends won't be able to play ever again. This is so heartbreaking and that woman! what a bitch! i can't believe she would say something like that about Sergio.

wow that was pretty intense and your vocabulary for the chapter was amazing. You're doing a really good job for this story.

Wow. :D I am SUCH a trend-setter. Not only did you uptake my vocab, but you took up my fave line from my fave song - albeit, it reminds me of that asshole. :D Keep it up.

It makes me curious as to what is actually happening. i have a feeling that this is going to be some story. Can't wait to read more.

I like the sound of it, but I understood nothing! I think that's cause I'm tired, but I wanna read more! :D wriitttee.

Grammatical errors, m'dear. ANDDDD,,,,expressions have errors too. We shall talk 'bout that later! Can't wait to read! Muah, besos. xoxo