This Is Not About Love - Comments

  • Delightfully Weird

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    I'm not asking you to write them for me, Monica Liz. I already know where I'm taking the story. Sometimes it does help if I get suggestions for fillers, because let's face it, there is not a big dramatic moment in every day of your life. There's just not.

    Naturally I assumed some of the readers wouldn't mind having a little insight to the sequel (I haven't written it yet, but I've outlined it), and I did say beforehand that you shouldn't read if you didn't want to know the very minuscule spoilers that really have no context to the actual story itself.

    And as for the ending itself, I have not thought of the ending to the series in it's entirety, so I have no clue where I want it to end.

    Keep in mind that I'm far from being done with this story.
    August 15th, 2011 at 01:44am
  • Monica Beth

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    i think you shouldn't tell us about the ending. think about what the characters would want. make yourself be them for a moment. find the answers. don't ask us because we aren't writing them, you are. you know where you're going to end things with : )
    i think you know how you want it to end. i'm so sad this is ending though D:
    August 15th, 2011 at 01:19am
  • bealiveplaydead

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    LOVEDDD IT lol
    August 15th, 2011 at 12:52am
  • Storm Sparks.

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    Holy crap, they got married?!!! Whoooaa!!! The part about Riley getting in touch with a former flame of his , is worrying me. If Amanda somehow comes back into this story, I will stab someone. I'm serious. These two better have a idyllic, yet dysfunctional life in the sequel!
    August 15th, 2011 at 12:18am
  • MyBreakdown

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    I hate Effie, shes such a bitch. I love the story though(:
    August 10th, 2011 at 05:54am
  • MyBreakdown

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    I hate Effie, shes such a bitch. I love the story though(:
    August 10th, 2011 at 05:54am
  • th9716

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    Nuuuuuuuuuuu!! Not the last chapter!! You must write more! You can't just hook us on some amazing story and stop!!! Quickly now, Write! Write! Write! By the way, I think you should *seriously* consider going to school for writing and become a legit author and publish a book. I would totally buy them. And say I read your stuff before you were all famous. I love youu!! please update!!
    August 8th, 2011 at 10:07pm
  • Monica Beth

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    Fucking mibba for not sending me email notifications for this story! But I'm back and ready to read the rest of the story asap! I love it so far! And Christa's going to get mad yet happy that they're both pregnant after flipping a shit for not knowing. Jennifer is going to ecstatic! I can't wait to read the upcoming chapters, man! xoxo
    August 8th, 2011 at 03:11pm
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    i started this today and im alreadyon chap 40
    August 8th, 2011 at 02:27am
  • th9716

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    why doent riley love her?! lol love the story though:) keep it up
    August 7th, 2011 at 09:31pm
  • chibo2002

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    When I read your first update today, I was so nervous about Riley and Lola's relationship! And than, thank the lord, you had a second update and now they are engaged!! I am so happy. Love them and your stories! I hope there's more romance and scenes with Riley and Lola. Absolutely one of my favorite couples ever written! Keep updating!
    August 7th, 2011 at 05:25am
  • bealiveplaydead

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    Ahhh update sooon :D
    I freakin loved the latest chapter
    THANK YOU for havin her tell Riley
    THANK YOU!!!
    August 7th, 2011 at 04:59am
  • cuteself22

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    Im so exstatic rite now !! Delilah and Riley are soooo freakin cute. im happy he's okay with the baby situation and still wants to marry her. Cant wait for next chapter :)
    August 7th, 2011 at 02:25am
  • Im_A_Fan_Of_Myself

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    Loved the ch glad there staying together
    August 7th, 2011 at 12:50am
  • akanevampire19

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    I hope Lola at least tell she's pregnant to her sister... Effie is really evil! I don't understand how can she treat Lola like that, she even got an abortion. I hope Lola and Riley can be happy =)
    August 6th, 2011 at 11:57pm
  • AngelsWickedScheme

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    LOVEING IT MORE AND MOREEE. AHH u are so talented. Why do i feel liek somethings gonna happen to the baby?? :(
    August 6th, 2011 at 11:29pm
  • Storm Sparks.

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    Okay, I'm calm again! They're okay!!! I hate Effie for making Lola feel that way :( I wonder how they're gonna react!!!
    August 6th, 2011 at 11:22pm
  • AngelsWickedScheme

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    I love this story!! Ahh you are so lucky to have such a large following group. And all these comments :) I was wondering if you could check out my story "Mastering the Art of losing" ??
    August 6th, 2011 at 07:42pm
  • akanevampire19

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    After he proposed and everything..... =( I want moooreeeeeeee!!!! I hope they can go through the situation together =)
    August 6th, 2011 at 06:53pm
  • Storm Sparks.

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    NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! You did NOT just do that!!! I think I'm gonna cry! He proposed and everything!
    August 6th, 2011 at 04:42pm