The Girl in Blue - Comments

38- Things aren't adding up. Not at all. First of all, Tom told Aurora himself that he was still at the orphanage. He said so by the Lake. Secondly, no one ever discovered that the monster who petrified and killed students was a Basilisk.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Offsetting. I like that word. It's so British.

I love the sarcasm in chapter twenty-six. Did you change the spelling in Madeline's name?

Aww Lestrange was actually being decent! With good intentions! You just killed the viciousness in the name. But it's all over now :(

I think we needed a reprieve from Tom. That break in the story was by far the most interesting and unpredictable!

Of course, I loved the first chapter and now to the second one!

First chapter in and I'm falling in love with this story all over again.

I love how you portrayed young Tom. He's so dark and still mean. I like that he 'tolerates' Aurora. And how he dislikes the other children. How he's already the disturbed child that he is.

I also love young Aurora. So innocent and sweet. And so optimistic! Seeing her so happy and full of life makes me want give her a big hug knowing what is going to be happening in later chapters.

"I can make them!" She sat down on the bed next to him. "I really want to take you with me."

I know that is supposed to be a serious, heartfelt moment but for some reason it made me laugh because it kind of sounds like her wanting to take a pet with her. I know that was not your intention or anything but I'm don't know, it made me think that way. It really is a touching moment though. It shows how much she cares about Tom and how much his friendship meant to her.

Everyone dubbed them as the two friends, Aurora did too, so Tom went along with it.

Can I say again how much I love young Tom? He's just like so nonchalant about that. He's just going around like "meh" lol.

I think that Tom is more upset over the fact that Aurora is leaving and not him. Like, I'm sure he didn't want to go because, like he said, she was one of the few people he could tolerate. But I think he was more upset over the fact that she was leaving the orphanage and he wasn't.

I'm going to re-read this because I miss it and I love it. Plus I need inspiration and what better to inspire me than your amazing writing?

So here I go again! Jumping back into The Girl in Blue to laugh and cry and get pissed off at Tom and to have my heart broken all over again.

I can't fully remember how this ended either. So that's good because it'll be a whole new journey. Plus maybe I'll see things I didn't see before. :)

So here I go...!

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ANYWAY I JUST WANTED TO SAY HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS IT'S GREAT

this story has my heart ♥

this story has my heart ♥

So I just and across this in my subscriptions & it oh MY HEART. I think you ended this story perfectly. It makes me so sad to think about with Lord Voldemort though. If only he had parents to love him from the start or a best friend or idk, SOMEONE to love him so much & change him, he wouldn't have turned so dark. But then again your story says otherwise. Idk it makes me sad. I will always love this story girl, just wanted to say that

somehow i never got an email saying this was updated but i happened to come back and check.

and oh my god. this ending was just perfect. it was nothing like i expected and it got me a little choked up. i just loved it.

This is the best Tom Riddle story ever. I did not expect the epilogue I thought he would of killed Remington or someone. It's sad that they didn't end up together but just knowing that he did feel the same way was amazing! I will definitely check out your other stories because you can definitely write good! Sorry it's so long.

This was great! I absolutely love Tom Riddle stories and the way you managed to maintain his character so well, while still managing to make it a love story was fantastic!

Oh my gosh, this was THE absolute best Tom Riddle story ever made! I cried at the end of this! You're amazing! :)

What a great ending. I actually never thought Remington would be with Aurora in the end! It felt nice to be surprised and my predictions be wrong :)

I'm glad that Tom let Aurora and Remington go free. I probably would have thrown a tantrum and thrash everywhere crying if you made Voldy kill them off, hahahah! xD

I'll definitely check out your Draco story though, since I love him as well as Tom. :)

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Actual fears are running down my face. You always make me cry. You certainly have a way with words and I am so glad you write stories for us all to enjoy. Thank you so so much. This is the best story on mibba. I am so happy to have read it. It is really difficult for me to put into words how much I love it.