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  • whilethefirewasout

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    Or how her new friends are bad news whatever
    April 10th, 2011 at 06:02am
  • whilethefirewasout

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    HE WANTS TO TALK ABOUT HOW JEALOUS HE IS!
    April 10th, 2011 at 06:02am
  • KaulanaRose

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    Love the storry so far :)
    And skyerocket's banner got me in the mood to make you one. Give your honest opinion, you don't have to use it obviously lol
    Let me know how many pixels wide your story layout is and I will resize it if need be.
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    Keep up the great work :}
    April 9th, 2011 at 02:31am
  • skyerocket.

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    Poor Aurora.
    I feel bad for her. Can't she just have some friends, seriously!
    :)

    Anyways, lovely update, as always.
    I can't wait for more.
    April 6th, 2011 at 03:24am
  • perfectionist326

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    Aw man. How come I see this going really bad, really soon? :/
    (As in the story line not the actual quality!)
    April 5th, 2011 at 06:12am
  • jazzy512

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    lol, seems that i've stumbled upon yet another amazing story. i'm not really sure if you are considering this a fan fiction, so please don't take that word the wrong way, but i'm loving you're fan fic. now i love the series and jk rowling, but i also really love where other people have taken her story's characters particularly the underdeveloped ones like tom riddle. i can't wait to see what you do with this story. I'm about to subscribe to it as soon as i finish writing this message. keep up the good work and i hope (unlike me, lol) you stay inspired to write.
    April 5th, 2011 at 04:49am
  • whilethefirewasout

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    Good for Aurora! Screw what Tom thinks, she's happy!
    April 5th, 2011 at 04:24am
  • the right girl

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    looooooooooooooooooove
    April 3rd, 2011 at 04:29am
  • whilethefirewasout

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    Tom likes Aurora! HE likes HER! And he's jealous! I like her new friends haha
    April 2nd, 2011 at 08:34pm
  • skyerocket.

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    Another wonderful chapter. Actually, I think it's one of my favorites so far. :)
    I'm glad she has friends and I really like Remington so far - and we don't know anything really about him yet. haha.

    I like James as well. He seems nice.

    Update again soon, please!
    April 2nd, 2011 at 07:16pm
  • PirateWolf17

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    I'm luvin this story so far. Can't wait to see where it goes. Update?
    March 31st, 2011 at 10:29pm
  • whilethefirewasout

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    Tom should suck it up and stop being so bitter! He actually reminds me of myself a bit. Just the whole staying calm while someone is mad at you thing, not the bitter part. I am anything but! Haha. Anyways, I like how clever both Tom and Aurora are!
    March 30th, 2011 at 04:43am
  • skyerocket.

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    I'm so excited that you updated again. I was going to ask you when you were planning to, but I didn't want to rush you haha.

    I loved the update, as usual.

    I like that you can tell that he cares for her without exactly showing that he does, you know?
    Telling her that it's better that she doesn't try to be his friend shows that he wants her life to be a good one. That he wants her to be safe. Yet, he isn't exactly being friendly with her.

    You did a great job.

    I'm so looking forward to an update.
    Keep up the great work.
    March 30th, 2011 at 03:30am
  • skyerocket.

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    I'm so glad you updated. :)
    I was wondering when you would.

    I loved the update and I liked that she was smart, but didn't know everything. It was refreshing. Some stories the girl knows all the answers and it always seemed silly to me. But I really like Aurora so far and I can't wait to see her grow and develop throughout the story.

    Tom is a jerk. I'd have slapped him...or something. lol.

    I look forward to the next chapter.
    Update soon.
    March 26th, 2011 at 12:15am
  • whilethefirewasout

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    I hope your day gets better! =) and Tom is just being an Angry Andy. He's just a little mad that she left him at the orphanage!
    March 25th, 2011 at 11:05pm
  • skyerocket.

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    I love your writing, simply love it.

    Poor thing, she doesn't recognize him. But then again, boys do change drastically. So I can totally see why she missed that.

    Anyways, lovely chapter. I’m looking forward to an update and I can’t wait to find out where this story is going and what you have planned.
    March 22nd, 2011 at 02:51am
  • whilethefirewasout

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    Oh, but it WAS him! ohhhh this is gonna be great!
    March 22nd, 2011 at 12:00am
  • skyerocket.

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    I love the layout, it's absolutely stunning.
    The idea is intriguing and I'm eager to find out what's going to happen next.

    I like that you can see Tom closed off, even as a child, and how he feels betrayed. It would be just like him to feel that way even though it was out of Auroras control.

    Keep up the great work.
    I'm looking forward to the next update.
    March 21st, 2011 at 04:40am
  • what's the story?

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    Definitely interested to see where this is going...
    March 21st, 2011 at 12:39am
  • whilethefirewasout

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    So far, so good!
    March 21st, 2011 at 12:25am