aoierhaoweiufrashofiuaerkjyhaewoifuakdjhgfbaoileukfjadhngoiaukjdghandlkfgjahg. words weren't even coming to mind. this was so fabulous and i loved it and please do something with paul and martin i'm DYING to know their back story and what's going to happen with them. this was so perfect and jack was such a perfect dory and zack was a great nemo and alex a great marlin and you made the finding nemo stuff transfer into real life human instances so perfectly. i LOVED it.
This was amazing I cant even it was just oh my god this is too good fir my brain to comprehend the suspense the laughs the everything ugh it's just so beautiful sniff I can't even imagine what the spin-off will be like this is so amazing so so SO amazing I love it
I loved this!! It was so good...They way you portrayed all the characters worked so well! Jack had to be one of my favourite! I loved the ending too!! Showing how thins came together for them all!!
Dude. everything you write is quality. I swear to god. You are one of the most talented writers. I loved it and I could see the similarities between this and Nemo! Yay! I love Nemo. Anyway love what you've done. Can't wait to read more of what you write.
This was just amazing in every way, at first I didn't think I was going to like it, I have no idea why but an hour and a half later this story is one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. Jack was just adorable the whole way through. I liked how Alex gradually stopped being so paranoid and overprotective because of all the people he met along the way, and by the end he'd developed into a perfect boyfriend by letting Zack do his own thing but still caring about him. I like the way you wrote Alex and Jack's friendship, that was just perfect. All of the friends Zack made were great too, and I totally ship Matt/Sierra now. This is definitely going to be one of those stories I always come back to and read over and over, it's amazing and you can tell how much work you put into it.
I also love how Cassadee was a prostitute because I don't like her and it made me happy inside.
Wow, this was seriously amazing, you're such a great writer. I loved this whole story and how it was based off of finding nemo. I loved that it was Zack/Alex too, you write that pairing so well and all the characters in the story really well. Gahh, good job everything about this is A+++++++++++ :D
OMFG THIS IS JUST LIKE OMG I CAN'T EVEN........AHHHH I LOVE HOW JACK IS ALWAYS GETTIN HIM AND ALEX IN TO A BIT OF TROUBLE WHEN HE OPENS HIS MOUTH HAHAH CLASSIC JACK AND I TOTALLY LOVE HOW ALEX WAS WILLING TO DO ANYTHIN FOR ZACK AND JUST DRIVE THE WHOLE WAY JUST TO GET HIS BOY BACK AHHHH LOVE IT....AND HELL YEAH I'D LOVE A SPIN-OFF
Asdghlkhhs. That. Was. Too. Friggin. Cute. I Seriously sat for two hours reading it straight through. I must say, you did an amazing job. I loved it and would very much enjoy a spinoff for Paul and Martin :)
Okay, this is totally amazing and I would be totally okay with just reading it over and over again *__*
The characterisation is perfect and ordinarily where time jumps wouldn't work they just do and how it's so heartbreaking at the start but it all comes together wonderfully at the end. I love how we know both sides of the story, and at a point I was totally reading it with a :3 expression.
The friendship Jack and Alex have is really well done (it's basically like me and my friends) and I'm pretty sure I at least got some of the Nemo characterisation crossover -really nicely done.
So yeah. Probably the best fic I've ever read. Ever.
Geezus fuck. That was amazing. I think... Thatvone was of the best things I have ever read. I'm so jelly of your writing skills. <3 Oh yes. I'd like to read the spin off. :]
oh my god reina that was amazing. i, i don't even, what. i loved you you portrayed jack and alex's friendship, oh my god it was beautiful. and i loved zack and alex's relationship, like how alex drove across the country just to see him oh my god. djghfjskgjhfk. <3333
words weren't even coming to mind. this was so fabulous and i loved it and please
do something with paul and martin i'm DYING to know their back story and what's
going to happen with them. this was so perfect and jack was such a perfect dory
and zack was a great nemo and alex a great marlin and you made the finding
nemo stuff transfer into real life human instances so perfectly. i LOVED it.