Better than you can imagine - Comments

Ohhhhhh 0_0
I NEED MOOOOORE. I WANNA KNOW EVERYTHING. O_O
Love ya

yay it wasn't two years! XD

I'm shocked you actually revealed the truth about Gerard. I like how you did it though. Now, I'm more than anxious to see how you're going to finish this out 'cause you switched it up on me. Heffer! :D

Is Frank's Dad's death the sole trigger to his whole mental break? Did kids tease him? Now you make me think of so many questions about what could've happened. I know a parent's death is pretty massive, but still, I think there's more...or that's just me.

Regardless, I hope your writer's block continues to stay at bay...even with your busy lady schedule. :) <3

My feedback was given to you via face-to-face. Just don't make me wait like two years for another update! :D

glad I am currently out of my writers block rut. I have already written the next chapter. I hope to finish this story soon! :)

Great chappy. I loved it. It was amazing.
Love ya

yes I plan to write more... it's just a matter of overcoming this writers block. I've had it for a while. I'll probably sit down after finals are over and see what I can come up with. the problem is I know what I want to happen, I just don't know how to make it happen! lol

I have a feeling I'm a little late to the party which is disappointing; this is a really great story and I was excited to find out what happens next.
If you are continuing this, then 'yay!' I can't wait to read more! :D

worry not my friend, they are coming. I plan to have things start rolling within the next few updates. :)

you have pretty much made my life. jk! but i love you a little more right now for having FINALLY updated! <3

if you're still sticking to your original plot, i'm still very much hooked and wanting to know the events that lead up to such happenings! :D

DEEPEST APOLOGIES TO ALL OF YOU. You have no idea what I have gone through all of this time. crazy times my friends, crazy times. I had such horrible writers block, went through so much emotional wreckage. I had written a chapter but it got deleted, and so I got so angry that I just didn't write for a long time. but now I am back on my feet. I got over my frustration, and love this concept too much to throw it out. This semester ends for me tomorrow and then I get all summer to work on this story. I may get some writing done this week, since oddly enough I write my best really late at night when I'm somewhere between exhausted and mentally loopy. :)

I really like this story, it's so deep.
Update soon?

:O
You updated.
Was good. :XD

i'm still hooked and i knew you were updating because you told me, but i still got excited when i read the notification email telling me this story updated, it was legit and in print!

i'm excited to see where you go with this, even though i know where it goes, i want to see how it gets there. i just hope i'm not the only one commenting again...but i do it because i <3 you and i adore this story!

and yes, that's DRARRY in my icon...you of all people should know how much of a pathetic fan of that i am! XD

::new reader / subscriber::

GO FRANKIE!!!!

This story is good!!!

But it's not a Frerard !?!?!?

Awwwwww total bummer!!

I found this by searching 'Frerard"

However I've gotten fairly attatched so I shall continue to read this =D

Update soon please!!

i loved this surprise!!! as soon as i got your text i was like, she updated!!!!!!!!!!! woot!!!!!!!! XD i danced a little in my car too!!

man i'm such a loser...well as for friends reading friends stories, i can see how it's easier on my part to do so, you only have one and i have like a billion...lol....

i think that was the lamest attempt at an appropriate apology ever...you wrote it well but come on, through a friend?! wtf?! lame cory, lame.

i'm really excited that you updated, i just hope i'm not the only one?! ily

oooh page claim
i dub thee

phantom derrick!

yay violence lol
thank god frank stood up for himself!

:shifty so remind to never piss you off....

i think that was a superb chapter...the anger and torment that frank has had bottled up was expressed--albeit in violence--very well i think. i'm glad he finally did something...cory deserved it for everything he's done to frank. well done friend, well done.

you updated! i mean i know talking to you the other day and all, you did say you would...but you did! :arms:

i'm glad to see i'm not the only one who comments your story in great length...though most of the time i'm telling you how much i miss you and how great this story is.

is frank going to finally hit cory? or at least yell at him or something?!

{i momentarily forgot what we had discussed about this story and i was about to say something and then i realized, i already knew that answer! haha, i'm such a dweeb!}

:shifty now that i've just realized i know what happens...i really wish you'd update more...but i know you're a busy lady and i'm sure--especially with your writing style/technique--this update took a while for you to do...so i'll just have to wait patiently for the next one...

I turn my head to glance at Gerard, who is observing the sides of the buildings as we slowly pass them. And to think, he asked me if I was an artist. Maybe he's the one that observes too much... then again, I must be pretty observant to observe that he observes... blah.

meehee! that paragraph made me laugh! i'm in love with it...i clam it as mine, and there is nothing you can do about it!!! :lmfao yeah, i think someone stole my perscription meds...i hope its not too noticeable...:lol:

aww, i'm glad that you're all settled and stuff...and i'm very happy with this chapter, as you should be too! i'm also very glad that you took time out of your hectic schedual to update too! that makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside...though i'm not quite sure why...hmm...:grr: