have I told you how much I dislike Carson? I think I have, but I'm going to say it again, I really don't like the man. There's something fishy about him that I don't trust. He's just....egh. I really can't stand the man. Zacky on the other hand... I can't begin to say how much I love the character you've portrayed him to be. I hope he clocks Carson at one point. If it came down to it, Zacky would totally pwn him. And I'd stand there giggling like some psychotic woman. He's just...yeah. Zacky's hot, and Carson's a jerk. I can somehow see him turning out to be some kind of closet furry or something, which actually makes him less of a jerk and more of a creep. That's probably just a product of my overimaginative imagination. I can't wait until the next chapter!
Kissing Zacky was so much different than kissing Carson. Both of the kisses were nice, but Zacky's had such an edge to them, and I never knew what was coming neck.
This seems really good so far. I love the detail! Carson does seem like he has issues but until I see a rude side to him, I'm feeling neutral. Hope to see more (: