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  • OutInTheCold

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    This was really good :o It really is. Like the way you wrote it, I will read the hole thing indeed :D
    Keep up the good work <3

    And if you like the circle of DC I have a storie about Nick Jonas (Once In A Lifetime) You're very welcome to read and tell me what you think!

    And again, love this storie <3
    October 5th, 2011 at 06:53pm
  • finnick.

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    Shaina! Ecstatic you're getting back in the writing game again! I was stoked when I saw it was a Nick J. story :)

    I don't think you realize how long it's been since I've actually read a JB story...even though they still know how to make me smile!

    Anyways I think your off to a great start. Nick and Aimee are cuteee...and I think its an idea you can definitely develop. FIDM! I'm going there next year :)

    But other than that there are only a few grammatical errors. Just fix those and you've got a nice story on your hands!

    Much love,
    Bailey
    March 26th, 2011 at 06:03am
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