Play in the Surf - Comments

  • Hiyoubyeyou

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    This story is killing my cute-o-meter XP
    April 6th, 2011 at 03:44am
  • A S K I N G .

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    What?
    So little comments on something so adorable and well written?
    That's just ridiculous.
    I read everything you have written so far and I really really like this story! :D Kola is so cute<3

    Update soon please?
    April 3rd, 2011 at 06:16am
  • moonlightray

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    No way! You're a D. Gray Man fan!
    April 3rd, 2011 at 06:09am
  • Broken_Elli

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    This is great!! Been glued to it the past few hours =3 please write some more!! =) ~*~
    April 3rd, 2011 at 12:55am
  • bones n' feathers.

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    UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!
    April 2nd, 2011 at 11:43pm
  • timberwolf121

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    So sad but do happy good job.
    March 30th, 2011 at 09:52pm
  • Durch-Den-Monsun-87

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    hmmmm what to sayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy....
    um...FUCKING AMAZING STORY!!!!
    ya know for a long time i wasnt really into reading slash stories but now i just can't get enough of them. it's weird i know but they intrigue me. and i'm really loving this one. i just read all 13 chapters and subscribed and i'm Canny poo reminds me of my kitty cat, Diamond. who i call fat cat and Diamy most of the time. she's not a kitty anymore but she's my sweetie and i've had her since she was a kitty. she thinks she's a puppy dog though b/c she grew up with our past dog. they were both puppy/kitty at the same time. and oh look here she comes to climb all over me and demand attention at 12:30 in the morning. she has a motorboat purr and is always on my bed. sometimes under it. lol. i figured that was where canny poo was. newho i'm done blabbing! love the story!!!!
    update soon pwease!
    March 30th, 2011 at 06:38am
  • conqueror-

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    I really like this story (: I really like the character development. Update soon please!
    March 30th, 2011 at 04:19am
  • crescendo.

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    NOOO!
    That makes my heart want to cry.
    I wasn't on the last chapter.
    IT DIDN'T TELL ME! I'M SORRY!
    My email didn't alert me. I'm sorry, I wanted to be there every single chapter.
    That makes my sad.
    Which isn't good.

    But you know, I really liked the chapter I didn't comment on(not that I don't like every chapter). But this one made me smile[and do a not so incognito fist pump] because Gallagher actually did something good. And the chapter after that made me smile too. Because, well, Nika is just a sweetie.
    March 30th, 2011 at 04:09am
  • Snowfall Melody

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    :) Very cute story. quite conflicting
    March 30th, 2011 at 02:01am
  • Wake!UP!DEaD!

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    ya i'm pretty sure Gallagher is bi-polar. one minute hes all nice and shit to Nika then hes a total bitch!
    March 29th, 2011 at 10:24pm
  • mndgalvez

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    I'm Totally Obssesd With "Play in the Surf".

    I Absoulutly Love IT!!!!! And The Frequent Updates...Anywho...I Love The Pace.

    KEEP UP THE AWESOME WRITTING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    March 29th, 2011 at 06:25pm
  • mndgalvez

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    I'm Totally Obssesd With "Play in the Surf".

    I Absoulutly Love IT!!!!! And The Frequent Updates...Anywho...I Love The Pace.

    KEEP UP THE AWESOME WRITTING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    March 29th, 2011 at 06:25pm
  • rainandsunshine

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    Gallagher is being so mean :(
    Canny-poo is just a little sweetie though <3
    I love this <3 Can't wait for more! Keep it up guys :D
    March 29th, 2011 at 12:03pm
  • Drowning Upwards

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    meany face! Gallagher should really be nicer and not such a dumb-ass! i'm on team CANNY-POO!!
    March 29th, 2011 at 10:03am
  • crescendo.

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    And there the sweetness goes.
    He's so mean.
    All Nika was trying to do was be nice to him.
    What's his trip?
    March 29th, 2011 at 06:39am
  • Wake!UP!DEaD!

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    Ughh that stupid jerk. And I love the twins
    March 29th, 2011 at 06:38am
  • crescendo.

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    Awww!
    What a sweetie!
    Timcampy and Gallagher both.
    He was acting so sweet.
    And you're welcome.
    :]
    March 29th, 2011 at 06:09am
  • Wake!UP!DEaD!

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    I knew the kitty was hidding under his bed!!!
    March 29th, 2011 at 05:44am
  • Wake!UP!DEaD!

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    Haha. Its sweet how he wants to get him something nice for his birthday.
    March 29th, 2011 at 05:32am