Look Behind Her Smile - Comments

Ah here is my proof so you don't think I'm making up. XD I was mistaken. It was Kurtni that made it/updated it.
http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/158134/

Hey no problem. I always notice things like that. XD
But, I did notice the link in the story. I'd take it out hun. Its against rules. Dujo made it a rule to not have links in the story area. Author's notes are fine but not in the story content. I'm not trying to be mean I'm just trying to help so you don't get reported.
Great update. :D I think you did fine with the spanish but I'm no expert either. XD
I can't wait for more.

Or a Phillip other that those names there wasn't much...

Plus he didn't really seem like a James to me

I calls him Charles because he is English and the Era of which he was born. 1600s...long ass time ago.

Not asking was a joke Bee xD
Thank you, so you're caught up now?

i loved it. i know you said not to ask but why name him Charles?
Other than that, I'm glad you updated.

-huggles Jess-
thank you soo much about the layout, I just needed a different one. The other one looked plain to me lol
:D It will be a bit because I'm gonna try to write a chapter to publish and one that is pre-written. So I could stay ahead, but you never know I might have another one really soon!!

:D Thank you, I like commenting on yours. They lighten up my day, and they are normall funny or serious. But both to me are really awesome! =D

I know, I just came up with it on the fly and it will work. Because you gotta remember Lexi looks like one of those 'dancers'. < --- sneak peek at what Sofie thinks)

I try hun! You're always so helpful with my stories so I owe you. :D
But I'm excited to see what Sofie will do. Nice layout. :3 It looks good. Can't wait for a new update. :D

Thanks Jess Babe :D I'm thrilled to know I have you as a constant reader :). Thank you, thank you.
I try to work on it when I can lol. I think people aren't really getting on lately, busy with school and stuff.

You still have me. :D That's something. I loved the update and thought it was great. You work so hard and I love the what you have to show for it. :)

Thanks Nae!!
I'm glad you love it! Ch5? Oh, it gets better. More exciting too!

Awesome story, Sweetheart! I love it even though I'm only on chapter 5! I now have you pry myself away to update Intrigued... will continue reading shortly!

Nae<3

=D
thanks Jess, I'm excited to hear that :)

I felt bad for him too, it just seem to fit right then. I give him some ice, it helps with swelling lol
I liked her a lot too, I write her a bunch but still. This is my top fav Lexi chapter (so far). Because coming up, it is gonna be funny. =)

You're welcome.
I think you're doing fine. :D

Well, another great update. lol I loved it. Though I feel a little bad for Brendon's eye. XD He's so stupid sometimes. lol But that's why I love him.
I really liked Lexi in this chapter. I don' know why but I really liked her in this chap.

Thanks :)

Thank you, I'm trying to ease people into her dark side. I don't want to throw her in there and people be wondering 'what the hell?'. Thank you for thinking that, I hope it turns out good too! I'm not good with relationships in stories..so I hope that is going well also lol.

Great update hun. I like how you're appraoching dark Lexi. I think it'll turn out amazing. :)

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You are gonna love it, Evil Lexi is gonna be awesome to write. I can't wait, it will be in a few chapters so you don't have to wait too long.