I Scream into the Night for You - Comments

This is super good :) it reminds me of a story I wrote before :) which got lost in the big blyss of other stories I wrote -.-;; but keep writting Im eager to know what happens next!!!!

So, it's really well written, the story was good and each chapter was just the right length. I liked the characteristics and am going to read on later. I genuineley enjoyed the characters and liked there personalities which made the story good

So, I'm here because of the comment swap thing and I have to say I'm glad it gave me your story. It's good, very well written and even though I'm not really sure about everything in the story, I can definitely respect and get into a well written story :)
Also, I read your a/n after the first chapter and think it's really awesome that you're doing this to get some of your own stuff out! Writing can be really good for that!
I hope you keep this up and it helps and life gets easier!! :)

Love it, her dad is a piece of work thts all I have to say can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Wow. This is really good. I usually don't read TH fics because they're always really poorly written twincest stories. Bleh! Anyway, it's nice to find one that's really well written. In other news, I had the hugest crush on Georg in 10th grade and I still do. Can't wait for an update!

All right so I've only read the first few chapters and I had to comment before I continue reading. Your layout is really cute. I like the colors and the banner and the story tittle is eye catching as well. Your writing style is very nice and even though I'm not the biggest Tokio Hotel fan, but I will not deny that they are good to look at. I like that she's not afraid to act like a bitch when it's needed. Oh and your grammar is very good too, and I always think that is a huge plus.

This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time! I can't wait for an update <3

Love it, so there was a good moment between McKenna and her mom thts sweet, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

The moment I saw the title I knew it had to be a Tokio Hotel fan fic, thanks comment swap! Awesome! Anyhow, I love the way you write. Great description, the writing flows really well; and I love the set up! You really have a wonderful way with words! Keep up the great writing!

When I saw the title I had somewhat of a feeling Tokio Hotel would be a part of this. I dont hardly read Tokio Hotel stories not because I don't like them, I love Th. I write stories about that. I can't explain why I dont read them. Anyway...

I like the beinginging, it left me hanging. (which I know there's more chapters) It left me wanting to read more which is really good.

I want to know why she's lock up. I like how you didn't tell it in the first chapter, its good to leave things out until later on.

I really like this and I will read more :)

Damn..this is awesome. I really loved it, from the minute I started reading you had me hooked. The layout is really nice and suits the story very well. I love how you started from the flashback in the child's point of view, it was really well done. I didn't expect what would happen in the next chapters when I first read the beginning of the first chapter. You did an awesome job :) You displayed the characters emotions really well.

First off, this is fantastic so far! I'm not a huge Tokyo Hotel fan anymore but they're a really good band that I have loved for years.

Layout: The layout is very pretty, simple, and easy to read so good job to Robin for that.
Title: Really like the title too.
Chapter 1: In the flash back when Kenna was a little girl, you wrote it perfectly! I love Georg. :) I love how she had to tell her mom the rules.
Chapter 2: YAY! Way to piss the bitchy doctor off! xD Wow you've really got me wondering now. About where she's at, why and what they think she did.
Overall: I love this so far and I've only read the first two chapters! It's well written, intriguing, and funny. I don't think I saw any grammar mistakes at all. Detail and emotions are good. I'm subscribing! And also reading the rest of this!

So I haven't read this in a while
But now I have caught back up.
I kinda forgot I already commented on this
But since I haven't read it in a while
I thought I comment on it again.

Anyway, wow...very inpressive from the last time.
I can't believe on what is all going on right now.
This story keeps getting better and better
I can't wait to see how you end something like this.
I do hope it ends well, if not..I'll have to sue you lol just kidding.
Very interesting

Keep up the good work
<3

Wow, this story seems really interesting! I liked how you started with a flashback, and made her childhood sound like it was quite sweet and enjoyable instead of all angst and horrible. I liked the dialogue between the mother and daughter, though she sounded very mature for a four year old xD McKenna sounds like she's a really fiesty character, I like that, it makes a change from girls being the kind that always let people walk all over them!

This seems like a really interesting story with really good characters :)

I'm sitting here like why must you tantalize me!?
I don't read a lot of Tokio Hotel stuff so it's nice to come and read this. Your style intrigues me. I haven't come across the crazy place kind of story before, so it's refreshing and original. I keep thinking, what happened to this girl? So of course I must keep reading and find out. And I want to know who he is. Of its Tom I'm so jelly. Lol.

I love your style. And this story is exceptional. Good job.

The first chapter is good. The little girl is sweet and I like the relationship she has with her mother. You did a good job of describing a realistic mother/daughter relationship, which can be hard when writing from the perspective of a small child.

You've got a good start here and I'm sure the story is turning out well!

Omg omg omg, the first chapter had me giggling my butt off XD. I'm glad to see that you're one of the person's that actually know how to write a child speaking. I've read some stories where a 4 year old child is like

"Mommy, come right this moment, this is very urgent!"

HAHAHA I applaud you.

I love all the descriptions and the details and I loved how you described the relationship between McKenna and her mother. That was adorable

The ending of the last chapter was totally caught me off guard and it's obvious that this is a good story. Keep up the good work =]

The smell of apples, pumpkins and leaves were all around me. The sky was a bright blue, and the trees were starting to change colors. It was a cool crisp fall Saturday.

Gotta admit, this was my favorite line <33 not because of the lovely description but because I could just imagine everything <33
I adore the layout and banner :)
I'm not a big TH fan(never listened to them >.>) but I wanted to give this a try c:
Though I only read the first chapter(REALLY WANTED TO COMMENT), I think this is amazing <33
I thought the flashback was adorable but... pink :p
XP not my favorite color xD
McKenna is a vvery interesting name, that's for sure :)
I shall read more! XD
Update soon :) <3

Okay, so since I read the first two chapters a long, long time ago, it's going to take me a while to get back into the groove. From what I'm guessing, the MC is in a mental hospital/facility? I dunno, when I think of therapy sessions, my mind paints that exact picture. And Aaron seems like good comic relief; however, I found the main character's - I'm sorry, I'm waaaay too lazy to go see what's her name xD - actions toward Aaron a bit too mean, even if he is a major douchebag. But that's just me. I honestly don't like characters who are too overly mean, but yeah, it's whatevs. Anyways, this chapter was nicely written and I like what you have going on here. Good job!

I read the beginning of this story before and never came back to read the rest because I was busy. I am glad I did come back. The layout is great. I love the way you pay attention to detail. I like the way you portray the characters. This story makes me love Tokio Hotel even more than I already do.