A Whole Lot of Jackass - Comments

memyselfndI (100)

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Ok I love the story, but I've found a common problem with all of your stories.
You don't proof-read. Read over the chapters before posting them, find all of the grammar and spelling mistakes (which there are a shocking amount of) and fix them.
Or even ask someone you're close to on the site to do it for you.
You're a good writer, but you could be even better

April 16th, 2011 at 10:15pm

Novocaine (100)

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Gah! There needs to be SOOOOOO much more jackass in the sequel. But I love it!!!

April 16th, 2011 at 02:26pm

Cowboy 3 Tears (100)

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I like this story! :))

April 16th, 2011 at 03:37am

dokkidokki (100)

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Can't believe I'm the first comment, haha.
I hate Chad right now, really.

The plot is awesome so far. :)

March 27th, 2011 at 02:51pm