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  • memyselfndI

    memyselfndI (100)

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    Ok I love the story, but I've found a common problem with all of your stories.
    You don't proof-read. Read over the chapters before posting them, find all of the grammar and spelling mistakes (which there are a shocking amount of) and fix them.
    Or even ask someone you're close to on the site to do it for you.
    You're a good writer, but you could be even better
    April 16th, 2011 at 10:15pm
  • Novocaine

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    Gah! There needs to be SOOOOOO much more jackass in the sequel. But I love it!!!
    April 16th, 2011 at 02:26pm
  • Cowboy 3 Tears

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    I like this story! :))
    April 16th, 2011 at 03:37am
  • dokkidokki

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    Can't believe I'm the first comment, haha.
    I hate Chad right now, really.

    The plot is awesome so far. :)
    March 27th, 2011 at 02:51pm
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