I really love this idea, and the concept is just hilarious. I love Green Day and I can only imagine what would happen if BJ and Adie switched places. Kinda like Freaky Friday...haha.
Anyway, this was a good start but I think that your writing could use a little revision. The main thing I noticed was lack of correct punctuation, especially commas. Just make sure to read through and fix mistakes before publishing. Other than that, good job :)
Anyway, this was a good start but I think that your writing could use a little revision. The main thing I noticed was lack of correct punctuation, especially commas. Just make sure to read through and fix mistakes before publishing. Other than that, good job :)