I really loved this story nice job! especially how you captured kane's personality it was great. I am so excited for the next story and have fun in Texas..go big or go home! :)
YAAAY! Long chapter!! Its funny having Pat & Nats summer end, while ours is just getting started lol. OH! Another sequel! I guess I wanna see their a little bit into their marrige, you know? It doesn't have to be as long as Pat Kane and Me, or this one, but just enough to let us see them work together better married then just as bf&gf..
OH NOOOO! That sucks. Wonder how they'll move on after this.. I really like the new title, not really feeln' the new layout. But I'm not the author lol x) great update!
I liked chap 5.. ALOT. Things slowed done and picked up at the same time; Pat keeping his jealousy down, and Nat admiting that she still loves him. Game 3 here we come!