April 26th, 2011 at 01:17am
Firstly, I saw the banner and bam you had me. I could tell this was set back in the time of skullerys and such, which excited me.
You use a lot of description, but in a good way. I love how you tell me what's going on, but don't make me want to skip a few sentences here and there. I was glued, I wanted to know everything. I also really enjoy the characters personalities. They're believable and realistic. You've got a way with words.
You should continue because this will go places.
The prologue made me shiver and smile. Also, I loved how the next chapter was longer and had so much stunning detail.
Subs! :)
Can't wait to find out what happens! BTW do you watch Pretty Little Liars? Couldn't help but notice the girl in your banner haha.