This is fantastic :) I love your writing style, and your characters. I can picture them in my head while reading. Honestly, the entire storyline you have is interesting. Your first chapter hooked me, and I can't wait to read more :)
I love this story! Jason sounds like a really hot guy that I wish was my age. I nderstand that its been like seven years?, but I thought that liv would be happy to see him.
I stumbled across your story and I actually REALLY love it. Your writing style is very nice! I really love Jason even though it's only been a few chapters with his mention. Liv seems pretty awesome too. I wonder how she and Jason will ~reunite~? Update soon!
I love this story. I like ur style of writing. I almost started crying when Jason left, so sad. One ? if I may, biut why did u make her faint? ?= quesation
i like this alot! no ofense or anything, but is the main character, Liv, supposed to look like Victoria Ustice? just curious.....cuz im gonna think of her and her personality throughout the entire thing, and im not sure thats what u want or not? :/
i dont leave off on a bad not sooooo ITS AWESOME!!! KEEP WRITING!!!