I honestly LOVE this story. You're a fantastic writer, please continue soon! I'm not done reading yet, because I felt the need to comment after seeing your little message to Ryan. So, the bitch who hooked up with him needs to just... okay... burn in hell is a little mean but... The only thing that's upsetting me about Ville in this story is I seriously thought he loved Eva... Or was he tired of waiting for her? I think that's unlegitimate for him to think that though.
I started tearing up a bit again when I saw "R.I.P. Ryan Dunn" It's hard because I can't avoid it. It's everywhere I go. I can't imagine what it's like for Bam if I'm so torn up about it, even though I've seen the video.
Just finished reading the last 2 updates. My gord I'm so into this story XD I loved how you let her finally come out of her shell, and I'm happy Eva and her brother are finally forming the bond they almost never had. And *giggles* I love the cuddle scene. I just imagined all of it and my god I couldn't stop giggling! Can't wait for the next part!
I very much like this story! I also like the pace. I agree, its better to allow some room for a relationship to build naturally, than portraying a rushed and unrealistic idea of "love at first sight". It allows the reader the opportunity to become more invested in the relationship, the story, allowing for anticipation and hope. Leaving their imaginations to run, while dying for more.
Bahh I adored this chapter! The relationship between her and her brother connected in a weird way but still good! And I see she still reminisces the memories of her and her ex or still fiancee.
I'm happy she finally spoke to Ville about that thing.. Gahh I can't wait for the next chapter!
I Love, Love, LOVED The update! I love the childhood memories, and Lydia the neighbor. =3 That was a sweet part. x3 And I can't wait for the next part of the awkwardness of the brother sister meeting lol.
Loved the update! And man was that one fast! haha I like how you added the bit of 'flare' I guess would be the word of the girls and one being the ex. It's kind of obvious she has a thing for Ville, but at the same time struggling with the past she left behind.
Just finally finished reading the updates! Love Love LOVED! I couldn't stop giggling when Juka had said "SEXUALLY!!!" and went on from there XD And I love how you incorporated the 'Rock Star' status Ville never really used almost all these years. That was something I didn't expect XD.
I've posted a couple comments already, so I rarely know what to write.. :p All I can say is that it's an totally awesome story and I <3 it. The chapters aren't short at all and they're stunning too! I don't know, I could read it all day long without getting tired. !
Haha, I hope I'm not acting too freaked out..xD <3
I Absolutely love this story of yours. I read it all finally today and I can't wait for the next update! I would like to say I like how started off with the story, a bit torn down but still fighting underneath the rug, I guess would be a good way of putting it. How she sneaked her way out, met a total stranger who normally wouldn't give a rats ass XD, but made him a sweetheart. Which we all know Bam is when he wants to be. Then the attraction to the V-man. I really can't wait for the next update!
You're a fantastic writer, please continue soon!
I'm not done reading yet, because I felt the need to comment after seeing your little message to Ryan.
So, the bitch who hooked up with him needs to just... okay... burn in hell is a little mean but...
The only thing that's upsetting me about Ville in this story is I seriously thought he loved Eva... Or was he tired of waiting for her? I think that's unlegitimate for him to think that though.
I started tearing up a bit again when I saw "R.I.P. Ryan Dunn"
It's hard because I can't avoid it. It's everywhere I go.
I can't imagine what it's like for Bam if I'm so torn up about it, even though I've seen the video.