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  • just.add.skates

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    I sobbed reading this story the entire time....but it was awesome...I was hoping that the baby and jayden would be okay and there would be a happy ending...but anyways great job!!!
    February 10th, 2013 at 06:10am
  • hockeychick37

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    that was so sad....why did she have to die! why did they both have to die!!! the baby should have at least lived but awww...thats sooo sad...great job with this though! i really enjoyed it!
    February 8th, 2013 at 02:35am
  • mikeysrevenge

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    nothing to type. whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy. sobbing crying really feel bad for jordan oh god.
    February 7th, 2013 at 06:40am
  • kendra-rae

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    Omg I'm literally crying this is so sad and heartbreaking. Now Mommy, Daddy and baby are all together now where they are safe and can be a family <3
    February 7th, 2013 at 05:29am
  • kendra-rae

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    Love it <3 You almost had me crying at this chapter but the next chapter I will be crying like crazy!
    April 17th, 2012 at 06:03pm
  • hockeychick37

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    Yaaaay u updated!!! This was sooo sad and sooo good!! Can't wait for the next update!!!!!
    April 17th, 2012 at 05:02am
  • hockeychick37

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    Yaaaay u updated!!! This was sooo sad and sooo good!! Can't wait for the next update!!!!!
    April 17th, 2012 at 05:02am
  • mikeysrevenge

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    MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    April 17th, 2012 at 04:56am
  • mikeysrevenge

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    WE WILL NOT BE SILENCED!!! WE WANT MORE
    March 8th, 2012 at 01:19am
  • hockeychick37

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    this story is soooo good and soooo sad!!! i really hope tht you update this soon!!!
    February 21st, 2012 at 09:31pm
  • kendra-rae

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    Love it :) could Jordan be anymore sweeter/perfect with her :D
    Cannot wait for more
    December 17th, 2011 at 01:28pm
  • RosiePosie08

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    Love this. So happy that u updated.
    December 14th, 2011 at 08:45pm
  • mikeysrevenge

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    if we hush up then u won't post faster and we want 1000000 posts soon
    December 14th, 2011 at 06:17am
  • mikeysrevenge

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    Oh, vous devez mettre à jour ce bientôt. Ajoutez plus temps de Marc et moi. 4 kids tous nommés Mario sidney Fleury ; Kyla Justine Fleury ; Sidney Jordan Fleury ; Vinny Mario Fleury. Sidney et Vinny sont jumeaux!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    to translate translate from French to english!
    August 31st, 2011 at 04:35am
  • kendra-rae

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    Great Chapter i love it <3
    August 29th, 2011 at 03:42pm
  • RosiePosie08

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    Great update.
    August 28th, 2011 at 04:42am
  • AllTimePensFan

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    I absolutly adore this story with all my heart. It makes me want a guy in my life like Jordan. Keep up the great updates.

    Are you on the east coast? If you are, I hope you and ur family are okay and safe.
    August 28th, 2011 at 03:03am
  • Cupcake1

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    Great chapter! The emotion was so real and I'm glad she has so many people to support her
    August 14th, 2011 at 05:56pm
  • princesspenguin

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    great update! i cant even to begin to imagine the pain Jayden is experiencing. i hope this doesn't effect the baby! Im glad you updated this. keep going! im sorry to hear about your rough week. Writing always helps me and I hope it can help you too.
    August 10th, 2011 at 01:08am
  • kendra-rae

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    oh my god! it breaks my heart, I can picture it. It is so sad that she has to go though that but glad she has the Penguins there for her!
    I really really love this story, it is amazing :D
    cannot wait for more <3
    P.S. I have to agree this story is too good to waste!!!!
    August 9th, 2011 at 08:00pm