About a Girl - Comments

rivals are insane, thanks hun!

Ultraviolett, XD Thanks! You'll love it.

Great update Jess babe :)
I can't wait to see how the practice is gonna go!!

love the update :D

Aw thanks sooo much. :3
Hey, no problem being on Team Bilvy. It's totally far and you just might get to see them together. Thanks so much for the comment.

only just found this, I really love it so far =)

and I Know Gabe seems so amazing in this, but I think I'm on team Bilvy. I bet he and Angie would be cute together

Good to hear some love for Gabe. lol
Thanks so much. :D I know! I want a jacket like that so bad. ;3 It'd be epic.
Well, you never know, Gabe can be pretty damn dom. :)

Team Gabe!
I loved it Jess, I really thought the jacket was amazing! I want a Cobra jacket now!! Anyway, good update, loved it. I see where Gabe is trying to tell her that he loves her and wants a relationship, but he isn't forcing her. That is good, girls never respond well to forced relationships.

lol I love that your team William and support. :D I like your vibe because that's what I get and we might see more of it.

I will! Thanks for the comment. :D

I'm definitely Team William, in case I hadn't said it before. I still think that Gabe gives off a vibe similar to that of an abusive, overprotective boyfriend. It's scary.

But update soon :)

Good to have another team Beckett! :D Thanks so much for the comment.

Team Beckett!

Thansk so much!

love the update :D

Caravaggio, I feel honored. Thank you for taking the time out to read and enjoying it. Another thank you for all the kind words. I try and hope for the best but glad to hear it seems believable. I guess I got lucky.

DiamondGirl827, glad to hear another Gabe lover! :D
Aww, its all good. I kind have been having that problem too with another story. I never get the email though I'm subscribe. Worse comes to worst we can ask Mibba about it.
But thanks so much for the support.

So, I rarely if ever read FanFiction, and it's even more rare that I would continue reading it far enough in to get a good feel for the story. Usually I lose interest pretty fast. But, I got on a Beckett kick this week (it's those damn eyes and the love of Oscar Wilde that get me), and I stumbled upon your story. It's really good. I like the Outsiders feel to it. I think it adds a touch that you don't see in very many stories. And better yet, you're good at writing that type of story. It's like you lived through that age of teenage gangs who only got in fistfights with the rich kids. XD

I would say though that it needs some editing. There are a lot of typos throughout, and I think more could be done with William's stutter to make it more constant and realistic. I would love to beta for you, if you would so wish. Honestly, I think this story is amazing. It could work almost as well as an original as it does as a fanfiction.

Team Gabe all the way! I never got a notification that this story was updated.*sadface* guess I'll just have to be diligent about actually coming on here and checking to see when you update.

lol I know. I'm cruel. It's just how I am. Ryland huh? I guess that works.
Oh no, William might get jealous. lol But I can see your point. :D

Thanks so much. I would have too! lol Yes, it's an improvment.

Jess babe why? I can't choose...they will find out and read this comment. I'm Team Ryland, I like Ryland xD.
Sorry, that was for kicks. I'm sort of torn, I like them both. Gabe probably more because he seems like a sturdy person. Exempting the gang stuff.

I really loved this chapter Jess babe, I almost jumped into the computer to shut Nate up. But Gabe took it with grace and didn't go ape-shit. That is good :)

Lol Thanks. I'll probably go back the the old one. Just messing around. lol
I'll try to get another update out asap. :D I'm gladyou like it so much.
Good to see another team Gabe. at least it a little fair now. lol But we'll see.