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  • UltraViolett

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    I was laughing really hard at the end Jess.
    "The Blob" I actually saw the ending half of the movie, I enjoyed it for being an older movie. But I just love her reaction to it. "I want to see the blob!" I pictured her about to jump out of her seat and squeeze Gabe to death.
    I thought it was really sweet, he wants to take her to New York. That is really cool
    June 22nd, 2011 at 10:11pm
  • Alphadisaster

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    I know right? Gabe is a jerk in this chapter. lol
    Thanks for the comment! I will. :)
    June 15th, 2011 at 06:27am
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    aw, bill! poor guy, gettin' made fun of because of his stutter.
    i honestly disliked gabe in this chapter. but it makes for a good story (:
    update soon!
    June 15th, 2011 at 06:17am
  • Alphadisaster

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    It was. Too bad he won't stay sweet. XD Or will he?
    Downhill? Who wants to go downhill? jk lol
    You're not wrong. Just a little wrong.
    lol Good idea. XD
    June 14th, 2011 at 05:59am
  • UltraViolett

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    very true xD
    I know, I thought that was really sweet of him. Even if he mad a scene, he was thoughtful
    hopfully..at least part of it will? xD Half needs to be good then it can go downhill.
    I'm wrong, I know.
    I need to go and finish ch10. Lexi is staring at me..creepy.
    June 14th, 2011 at 05:57am
  • Alphadisaster

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    lol Thanks. I'm glad you like that one. I like it too.
    Yup, but Will did get her in detention. XD
    I love getting flowers so I figured he was a gentleman and would give her some.
    Hmm, good idea. Maybe it will go smooth maybe it won't.
    June 14th, 2011 at 05:31am
  • UltraViolett

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    I like the two banner with the neon light colored signs :)
    I felt bad, Angie was chatting with Will then Gabe got mad. But he brought her flowers! Yeah, I'm a sucker for those in stories..flowers are meaningful =)
    Predication - Hopefully Bill will not get his teeth knocked it by Gabe. Angie and Gabe's first date will go over smoothly.
    June 14th, 2011 at 05:22am
  • Alphadisaster

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    Thank you. :D
    June 14th, 2011 at 12:06am
  • rivals are insane

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    love the update :D
    June 13th, 2011 at 11:19pm
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    MissPunkRawk, that makes me happy and sad. You'll see why eventually. lol Thanks for the comment.

    UltraViolett, You're right. She is terrified of upseting him. Gabe and Angie do fall under the "almost-boyfriend-girlfriend-dating-thing-couple?" catagory or at least I think so. XD But yeah, maybe he'll see how Gabe really is when he meets him.

    rivals are insane, thank you! XD
    May 17th, 2011 at 05:14am
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    love the update :D
    May 16th, 2011 at 01:55pm
  • UltraViolett

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    Poor Angie, she is worried about upsetting Gabe. Gabe is beyond upset at this point, or he will be soon after school. I don't want him to do anything stupid, poor guy can't always control his anger well. Gabe do something stupid, Rhemi gets to groin kick you for something. Hell, Rhemi might just do that anyway.xD

    But I'm worried for Angie, Vic is also worried about the girl. William still doesn't get why Gabe is well Gabe. What would Angie and Gabe be though? Friends or almost-boyfriend-girlfriend-dating-thing-couple?
    May 16th, 2011 at 01:29pm
  • MissPunkRawk

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    Mmm. I'm beginning to not like William.
    May 16th, 2011 at 07:01am
  • Alphadisaster

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    lol I'm working on it I swear! XD I promise more soon.
    May 15th, 2011 at 06:55pm
  • minitacos27

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    ugh I love this soooooo soo much i just wish there was more :( please update soon im dying to know what happens !!
    May 15th, 2011 at 06:54pm
  • Alphadisaster

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    Yes! Exactly! I may mention that. XD Oh I love your comments. XD They make me so happy. Thanks so much.
    May 9th, 2011 at 06:00pm
  • UltraViolett

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    Oh, damn..Gabe is mad now!! Angie is trouble...must control temper. Gabe needs a note pinned to his shirt "I don't control my temper well. You've been warned" It should be like the "Hi my name is" stickers.
    So what did William talk Angie into doing now? Got detention..oh I can't wait Jess.
    May 9th, 2011 at 01:20pm
  • Alphadisaster

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    Thank you! :D
    May 8th, 2011 at 08:17pm
  • rivals are insane

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    love the update :D
    May 8th, 2011 at 08:16pm
  • Alphadisaster

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    i guess you heard., I am so glad you do. XD That makes me so happy.

    UltraViolett, I passed on the message!. XD She'll get a laugh.
    You may be on to something. >.> <.<
    April 27th, 2011 at 11:14pm