Dance in the Dust - Comments

Bahahahaha XD
Your rants are so amazing!
That one just made my day lol.
Thanks for updating <3

I LOVE THIS CHAPTER. Levi is such a cutie.

Your sister sounds like my worst nightmare.
You can come live with me if it gets too bad.
How old is she anyway?

Oh my I lovee Levi (: soo cute (:
Hahahahahaha !
I love your rants. Their equally as good as your stories. Their A++

well that was a rant(: and haha update sooon! this chappy was cuutteee(:

Eek :3
Ish adorkable!! :) keep it upppp.

awesome story !!!
UPDATE SOON!!!

AWESOME SAUCE! this is great so far! keep updatin :)

Lol I had actually switched the pics of them in my head, and I'm keeping it that way cause .. Idk I just think it matches them more, but not when you look at their personality because Austin is always down and sad and super cute, and Dylan is a big playa.
Oh, and you need to push your sister with her face right in some donkey poo. Idunno where that came from.

Anyway, 'bout the story: It is not going too fast, 'cause I'm only reading it for the sex. Lol, jk, I'm not. Bahaha who am I kidding, of course it's for tha goddamn sex. Will you add a video of them doing it? You could ask your sister to find some gifs on Tumblr, they're not that hard to find.

This is SO good!(:
Update(:
Keep it upp(:

i just discovered this! and i reallyreallyreallyreallyreally like it! also, I've never actually read author's notes before, but yours are fun to read :D

your rants in the A/N entertain me
so keep them up ;)
and the story is NOT moving too fast
Levi just seems like a clingy person
so it fits xD
I really like it so far
and I hope you continue it! :D

ha i dont its moving too fast:)
i like the pace its goin
its cute:)
update?

I don't think I would be able to live with your sister.
I like my computer time too much without stupid people trying to take it from me.
Thanks for updating <3

Levi is so cute. And the name is so cute, too.
Gimme him.
asdfghjkl, mt. dew is so good.
Omg. My brother does what your sister does.
His computer broke, so i'm letting him use my laptop,
and he's suspended from school, so he's on it all day
and when i get home he's like "I'M USING IT."
*shakes head.

My sister does the same thing!

Levi is adorable. :)

And you should just start cursing your sister out every time she's like that.

My brother does the exact same thing. The worst part is, my grades count for university -.-' So I'm sure you can see why I'd gladly trade him for Laurentz. XD

Annoying sibling aside, this was rather amusing. :)

Okay, may I just say that I love you.
I love how you bitched out the person that reported you and told off your sister. It. Was. AWESOME! x)
And I love this story.
And I don't think it's moving too fast. I just think that at one second Geoffry doesn't like Levi, then all the sudden he thinks he's adorable. It was just random.
But I still like it. And I'm really sad there's no more Lovely. :((
I feel incomplete now. :(
Oh well. Shit happens.
xox

hehee aww Levi is sooo cute!

I love Levi, Geoffy needs to chill out :L :P
And no I don't think it's going too fast...

More soon please?