Dance in the Dust - Comments

Aww poor levi.

Awww. Poor Levi :(
Thanks for updating <3

Geoffrey is such a butt. lol.

;p i forgive your rant(: and i liked this chappy too! levi is the cutest(:

ugh. we should
like. live together, write slash and eat
food. since obviously, we're not getting
boyfriends.

dear sweet jesus. levi is so fucking cute.
ugh. can i just have sexy time with him.
jammies. jammies.

I love Levi, he's so obnoxious sometimes, but it's adorable and we all know Geoffrey secretly thinks so too. I can't wait for more of this, it's one of my faveourite stories.

Then kick her out.
It's perfectly legal now.

I think Geoff is super mean. All he wanted was a Teddy bear. Jeez.
Plus he's your brother. Be nice. You should be happy :)

“You’re a grown 22 year old man, and you still wear jammies?”
Who doesn't nowadays?
xD

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“EURGGGG. WHAT TH-”

“I FOUND A SHIRT. AND IT’S BIG ENOUGH.” I shriek, hugging him. He jerks away.

I just..
facepalmed. I laughed. A. Lot.

I found this chapter reaaaaaally amusing.
It madeee me smileeee. c:

D:
Geoffy is a grouch.
Like, scruge and that christma ordeal.

Anywaaays.
-coughcough-

You should like, gimme Geoffrey?
I'll let you have.. the awesome feeling in your
tummy for sharing.

Yeesh.
Good plan.

<3
Amazing update.
Never ceases to amaze me.

Awww.
He should so much nicer to his brother. >< or at least a little.
-pouts-
I'll let you snuggle with me if you needed a teady bear since your brother is too much of a douche to care. :)

I like this.
<3

Okay:
a) I ADORE this story.
b) Levi is my dads name
c) Levi acts EXACTLY like me with my twin sister.
d) Geoffrey needs to take some PMS-Formula or somethin'. Good lord, I think he really does have bi-polar. XD

Your 'rant' made me lmfao.
;D

I love this, by the way. Update? :D

Ahh i've seen Young Guns :D i saw them with ATL in March boom yesss! :P
Anyways...i love Levi! He's so cute! Geoff! STOP BEING A MEANY TO HIM! :(

More soon please? :P

I love these characters. lol.
(I feel the same way whenever my friends have a boy/girlfriend. LOL.)

Will they ever get along? o.o

HOW IS YOUR LOVE LIFE? Your sister kind of sounds like a dick. No offense.

Levi is a cutie. I love him. :)

LEVI IS SO FUCKING CUTE.
Can he just cum to me or something?
Well. Unless he's like twenty. No.
I don't care. Gimme. Like. Levi can
crawl into my lap any day and I won't
even care.
Geoffery is so pissy and angry. lawl.

Omg. If my sister did that [which I don't
even had one], but if she did, I would like
punch her if she blabbed about her
boyfriend all da time. I get pissy because
all my friends get boyfriends. And I'm there..
alone and looking all uhgleh.

Wilburt odd name. Like no offense intended
but... interesting.

over and out~

D: why so short? Wants moar!

Also, *hugs* I recommend good headphones and Skindred. Because no-one can feel bad listening to reggae metal :) (except my editor, but that's a whole other story...)

Can't wait for the next bit. :D

LMFAO! I LOOOVE YOUR RANTS! xD I LAUGH SOO MUCH EVERY TIME BUT ONLY CUZ UR FUNNY.....not laughing at the pain...so ya cool chapter....geoff OS bipolar

Bahahahaha XD
Your rants are so amazing!
That one just made my day lol.
Thanks for updating <3