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  • x.MrsAlexGaskarth.x

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    No!! You haven't killed it!! This is awesome! :P
    Remember our coversation on the bus, I think you should try and incorporate our idea into the story :P
    Anyway, I really liked that chapter, especially at the end where they were hugging each other, I was just sat here smiling goning "awww, that's so sweet!" :P
    So, yeah, more soon please!!! :) xx
    January 8th, 2012 at 10:49am
  • imperfecktion

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    It's not cliche - not much really happened actually. I dunno, following the same story line you started with never works for me.
    January 7th, 2012 at 09:16am
  • shinji

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    Yes, well, you see, on sone parts of you're story, you have the tendency to forget when to put commas. When you don't put them, I get confused because I suddenly read that part to fast or to slow.

    Nah, who am I kidding. I don't pay attention to grammar when the story is this good. xD
    But seriously though, you haven't made any big or confusing grammar mistakes cuz I would've noticed them.

    And no, you haven't killed the story. :3 Its actually developing pretty nicely. Can't wait till the next update.
    January 7th, 2012 at 08:20am
  • Itsgechi

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    I like how mr bradley is showing more emotion to justin :))))))
    January 7th, 2012 at 01:50am
  • Itsgechi

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    hmmm you said meth is most likely bad........what do you do on you friday nights???? lol
    January 7th, 2012 at 01:49am
  • TechTaKiity

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    STAY STRONG! <3 :D I hope you get back into the feeling of the story soon, I know the feeling of freezing up like that XD And don't worry your chapter was still very amazing!
    January 6th, 2012 at 11:24pm
  • x.MrsAlexGaskarth.x

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    Happy whatever day it is to you :)
    Sorry, I realised that I haven't read this in ages, then I was like, OMG, I've missed so much :'(
    When he said school, I was like "shif, he's do busted!" but you got him out of it!! :D
    Anyway, more soon!! :)
    December 28th, 2011 at 08:19pm
  • TechTaKiity

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    I read this and as usual, you did NOT disappoint :D Justin is turning into a bad boy (not really but y'know what I mean) :D wonder where that'll go! and omg you already started?! IS PROUD!!!! :D
    December 25th, 2011 at 04:31pm
  • shinji

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    I totally forgot about Rex. o - o
    I was like 'uh...the fuck is rex?' Cx

    But no worries, it came back to me after a while.
    Oh yes, and Merry Christmas/Eve.
    December 25th, 2011 at 02:37am
  • ImmaEnforcer

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    Love this chapter. =] and Merry Christmas!
    December 25th, 2011 at 12:58am
  • imperfecktion

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    Author evilness is always welcome in stories, especially slashes. It makes the story better... somehow.

    MERRY COMMERCIALIZED CHRISTIAN HOLIDAY IN DECEMBER!

    And that chapter was unsatisfactory because it was too short. But hee, Justin almost got caught.
    December 24th, 2011 at 08:51pm
  • Itsgechi

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    Hey I was the first comment... Hmmm guess that means I'm addicted:O well its better them being addicted to meth:-D
    December 24th, 2011 at 08:40pm
  • Itsgechi

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    Merry christmas eve sick puppy! I keep wondering if rex its mr bradley?? Also how did chester aft after the photo shoot? So curious:-)
    December 24th, 2011 at 06:33pm
  • LaRawra!

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    I was just wondering when were yall gong to post another chapter?
    December 22nd, 2011 at 10:51am
  • LaRawra!

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    I like this story! Suscribed to it! C:
    December 21st, 2011 at 12:19am
  • imperfecktion

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    Also, Chester needs to stop being a homophobe... just saying.
    December 10th, 2011 at 04:17am
  • imperfecktion

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    XD HAHAHA ahh that made me laugh and respect Chester a little bit more.

    I don't see it as wrong, mainly because they've hardly done anything, and Mr. Bradley doesn't even seem to like Justin that much - honestly, I'm not feeling the love here.
    December 10th, 2011 at 04:16am
  • Anna_doll

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    I wish I was able to have that kind of relationship with a teacher! Some of them are just so adorable. I love what you are doing with Mr.Bradley and Justin, it's not super creepy since Justin is a High school student....=]
    December 10th, 2011 at 01:00am
  • Itsgechi

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    I agree with the tech kitty person!
    December 10th, 2011 at 12:44am
  • TechTaKiity

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    NOOOOO Keep going!! Mr.Bradley and Justin need to get more intimate !!! :D
    December 10th, 2011 at 12:24am