Skipping a Beat - Comments

This is such a lovely story, and it has quite a summery feel; just form the layout. I love how much/little you have given away so far. What a wonderful way to start it off c:

Aw, loved the first update! :) It has left me intrigued. :) Can't wait for more of this! :D
P.S.- I'm hoping to catch up with your other story soon. I've been a bit behind on here the last few days. :/ Sorry I have yet to comment it. :*(

WHY MUST ALL OF YOUR STORIES BE SO BRILLIANT?

Okay. Done yelling now. Just had to get that out. Anywho, this is brilliant. I'm sensing this doesn't have a happy ending, which I'm impressed with. There needs to be more stories like that. I can't wait to see where you take this. (:

beautiful introduction that I think really started out this story well :)

I'm getting a feeling that this' gonna be great. And eventually will leave me breathless..

Ughhhhhhhhhhh, man. Yes, I just far too excited right there, but this is so so so so good! Lordy, I wish I could subscribe again and again! :D
Love you xox

Amazing, really. You have me hooked. This was an stupendous beginning, I can't even stress that correctly. It deserves to be in a book. I can't wait for you to start publishing books, seriously.

THIS LOOKS GREAT!
I'm going to subscribe! It looks interesting, from what I've read, and I'm really curious
as to what happens between those two :)

it's intoxicatingly brilliant!
(sorry i just wanted to try that word out.lol)
but i meant what i said!
:)

i really liiiike this!
You should update soon!

Really intriguing.
A next update for this is something I look forward to. :]
<3

Gotta comment again.
FURREAL. DO THIS OR I'LL DIE AND I'LL COME BACK FROM THE DEAD AND SUE YOU FOR MY DEATH.

For. One. Trillion. Dollars. And. Sixty. Three. Cents.

Betcha you don't got that kind of money. HAHA.

SO SAVE YOURSELF AND DO IT DO IT DO IT FOR ME.

(^ That's what she said. LMAOOOOO.)

(Sorry, had to. LMAOOOO)

Yes, I love you so much.

I'm hellu biased (BECAUSE HER NAME'S LAURA) but I think you should most definitely, positively work on this story. It looks b-e-a-utiful ;] xox

It should not be a surprise that I'm commenting and totally ready for this story seeing as I love all your work.

Hm... sounds intriguing. You should definitely keep and start this soon! :) Can't wait to see what you have in store! :D
Definitely... subscribed! :D

Woah, this looks absolutely amazing. I love the layout and the characters sound really great, subscribed.

I likey like like!

I must say, Emily. This looks really interesting!
I MUST KNOW WHAT THIS IS ABOUT.
So, get onto the writing, eh? EH!? GO. GO GO.
Subbed and err'thang.