Hey Kid...Welcome to the Family! - Comments

so far so great

Thank you!! I get what your talking about on the lay layout I was reading over the storie last night and the layout made it very hard to read. I also found grammer problems that I will be fixing soo, sothank you!!! I'd say it in German but I dont remember how to speell it lol no one to write or talk too.

Sorry to say, but this is not my cup of tea :S The idea itself is good, but the layout, the color of the text etc threw me off a bit, because for me it's really hard to read. You should double check your posts before you put them up to check them for spelling or grammar mistakes, punctuation etc. That would make it easier to read. and maybe change the layout a bit :) Just trying to help

Thank you thank you thank you :)

awesome awesome awesome

I will and thank you

Love this story :) please try and update soon and don't worry bout the spelling I'm the same :) x

So show of hands whos all mad at me? Im soooooo sorry after my friend passed away everything just got really out of hand, Ive been workin damn near 6 days a week, but Ill try and post something really soon. Again Im really sorry! Do you guys for give me?

I am glad that you update this i love reading it.

awesome story!! please update soon

my sister doesnt it for me but sometimes I write when she's not around, but try and find them all myself.

So I have honestly never noticed spelling issues. But if you have issues with spelling why don't you try to find someone who can read it before you post it to check for spelling errors.

Update again SOON!!

I fixed everything I could find now someone is say the layout makes it hard to read, is that true?

I can't believe you got reported. I love the story. I hope that you can update again soon.

Thank you :)

I really like this. Updates are fantastic =D

Amazing I love it I hope that you can update this again soon.

Aww how sweet!!!!!!!! Update SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thank you!