i noticed that when ever someone asks a question you dont add a question mark at the end but you put a period and its been bothering me a little. but im only on the second chapter so you might have fixed it already idk. just thought i would let you know :)
Sorry for the late comment again, but I've been busy with school. Great update though! I can't believe that Allie made Brian question their relationship. She was stupid for cheating on him and if she really loved him she won't have done that in the first place. I'm glad that Brian didn't make a stupid move and that he talked to Emma about it. I hate that Kyle keeps on coming around too. He is like Allie and both of them keep on coming around to bother both Brian and Emma. I'm happy that even with those two keep trying to break Brian and Emma's relationship they haven't succeeded. Can't wait for the next update!!!
Sorry for the late comment but it was a great chapter! I like how Brian's dad didn't get all mad about Brian being expelled. I'm glad that Emma was really cool about Brian telling the guys about Abby. Can't wait for the next one!!!
I'm glad Papa took it well about the expulsion and it's great that the guys know about her now. I love how this story is going. Great job and great update. I definitely can't wait for more. And is gonna look at that other story:)