What Doesn't Die - Comments

I liked the update!
I really want to know what happened to Emma.
She seems like a good person and Brian needs someone like her.
Can't wait for the next one!

Okay I had to get this out and I don't mean to sound like an asshole but what is with this excessive need for comments? It sounds like you seek peoples approval more than you enjoy writing. Now don't get me wrong I love a comment as much as the next person. But we put these stories out for people to read. Not just for people to comment.

Alright time for my critque. It is a good story, with a break from the ordinary which I have grown tired of reading. Please continue the updates and keep up the good work.

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Anyway keep up the good work.nd have a great day.a

Who is the girl that portrays Emma because she looks like this chick in my marching band that I have a girl crush on lol that what attracted me to this story
xoxxoxxxo

Great update. Can't wait for the next one! :)

Awe I love the update. It's sad that Zacky broke it off with Alli but maybe Brian and Emma will work out. Or if not maybe he will get back with Alli(: Who knows(: Update soon<3

update soon please

So I missed a few chapters in this story.
I really hope that Brian ends up with Emma, she seems nice.
Allie had her chance and she messed it up, but I want to know what she wanted to tell Brian.
I can't wait for the next update!!!

He is better without allie

I'm so glad he didn't call Allie back.

Great update. :)

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! Don't stop writing!!! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease?
Mind you, you have no choice >:D as I will send in my demon cat to eat all of your socks and fingers!!

Brian better knock the walking shit outta Zacky! If not, I'll do it for him! Grrrrrr!!!!!
Don't stop writing okay? Thank you :D
Keep up the awesome job!

No no no don't stop writing. I LOVE this story oh so much. Update soon<3

This is the shit! (in your words lol)

more please

You better not stop writing! I love this story! I really want to see what happens between Emma and Brian.

I think you're a good writer and I hope you continue. :)

Oh man I'm so glad he found some other girl but what is Alli gonna think when she finds out! Can't wait for more. Update soon:)

more please im happy he found some one new

Loved the new update. What Allie and Aacky did was so messed up, but I'm glad Brian doesn't care anymore. Can't wait for the next update! :)

Omg I loved it! More please. Update soon<3

Good update!
I wonder if Brian is going to kill Zacky.
Can't wait for the next one!!!

more moremore please