July 1st, 2011 at 05:59am
Okay I had to get this out and I don't mean to sound like an asshole but what is with this excessive need for comments? It sounds like you seek peoples approval more than you enjoy writing. Now don't get me wrong I love a comment as much as the next person. But we put these stories out for people to read. Not just for people to comment.
Alright time for my critque. It is a good story, with a break from the ordinary which I have grown tired of reading. Please continue the updates and keep up the good work.
Sorry but time for a bit of self advertisement check out my A7X story second heartbeat.
Anyway keep up the good work.nd have a great day.a
I really want to know what happened to Emma.
She seems like a good person and Brian needs someone like her.
Can't wait for the next one!