I wouldn't mind if you moved it to R I mean it's your story. Its your ideas. So I say if you think you should move it to R then go for it. Can't wait for the next update <3
@ c0llided. haha, yeah. I started writing this like a year and a half ago and didn't really think about how I was using the term Schizophrenic until recently and was just sort of like "shit." But that's why I really want to get to my favorite chapter because it sort of clears up my mistake. And I probably didn't use D.I.D. too accurately, I probably should have done some research first :P And thanks for telling me about how it's now called D.I.D. I've heard it before, but I always just sort of thought MPD was still the term people used. And thanks for commenting and all the nice words!!!!
I like your style of writing, it's different but it works :) And I like the plot, it's different but like I said; it's really good. I'll definitely be reading on & waiting for more~
The only thing I want to comment on is the "Multiple Personality Disorder" thing. It's actually D.I.D for Dissociative Identity Disorder, MPD is an outdated term. And from what I can tell [in the first few chapters, so not much] it's not completely accurate in this story but maybe I'm just being especially critical because I actually have D.I.D.
Still reading, as if there was any doubt. My brain wouldn't let me stop at this point. Just gets more amazing and addicting with every new chapter. Keep writing please, you have earned a fan!
Amazing story. I honestly wasn't too sure about it at first. But then I read Chapter 11, where Tucker and George fight, and got hooked. It has just gotten better and better from there. The way she screws with some of the staff is brilliant. This would make a great movie. Keep writing, I am now addicted. As soon as I reach the end of the chapter I can't click for the next chapter fast enough! Will we get to meet any more of the patients?
I feel like i'm watching a thriller or action or even a horror movie that i can't get up and leave even though i might want to. Like i hold the pillow to my face cause i don't want to watch but i stay to see what happens in the end.
I really like this story. It's fantastic and i will keep reading/commenting.
Tucker and George seem so dreamy, umf. This is a uniquely written story. I absolutely love it. I don't see many stories written like this that often. And when I do, they're usually lousy. This, on the other hand, was fantastic. Keep it up! Subscribing and recommending :3