I just read the whole thing today and I'm definitely loving it! My favorite Jordan Staal story yet and the idea is a bit cliche but you don't find a lot of those kind of stories here, surprisingly. I absolutely love the plot and how awkward Toby is, it's adorable.
UGH. THE SEXUAL FRUSTRATIONS. they are too much, I swear ahah. What with Flower making all of those jokes and here Jordan's getting ready to plan out what he'd do to her during the act and then BAM! she's cold out. I seriously can't wait for this to be updated, I love how easily the dialogue flows and I just can't wait for more :D
i just found this story and... now I am all caught up! You can't leave it hanging. Does she remember last night? Are either of them going to admit how they feel?
i just found this story and... now I am all caught up! You can't leave it hanging. Does she remember last night? Are either of them going to admit how they feel?
This is the best Jordan Staal story ever! Toby is such a down to earth and real character an really makes the story enjoyable! Can't wait for another update!
Just read this all in one sitting on my Blackberry at one in the morning and though I am tired as hell and my phone's almost dead, all I can say is that it was totally worth it. You're an amazing writer...it's just ridic how amazing you are! And I cannot wait for the next update of this!
Dude I do not know what to do with myself. I have read all of Empire State of Mind and WAG for Hire and now I must ever so patiently wait for an update. I don't really care which one because they are both awesome and I am in love with both, but an update would be great. You are a talented writer and I truly appreciate that you shared your work with the world. I love Toby. I'm glad there is another awkward girl about relationships cause I'll be the first to tell you I am far from an expert and can make any situation awkward. I love your writing and keep it up!
Little Note of Encouragement right here. <3 Took me a while to sit down and finally read this...I've been neglecting my computer as of late. But this was so sweet. And even had a little steamy action between the duo. I love it, as always. Update soon. <3
awesome! i love this story sooo much, i can just feel the emotion adn the situation like i'm there, you're an amazing writer! cant wait till the next chapter! :D
I really enjoyed this story