Lust for Blood - Comments

love the story. i read all of them in like three days it was sooooooo good :)

Ironic much? you gave me this story for a comment swap
and I began reading a few days back..so this should be easy.
I love the main character, her being half Vamp and half Witch. Its different. The way she's really nervous about being amongst all these new people, and how some of them are afraid of her
because they think she'll suck their blood, pretty funny because shes nothing like that aha.
Her mum sounds so nice, and the sweets she gave her, yup that made me barf a little
but hey thats a good thing, shes not human afterall.
I've only read two chapters, shall comment when I finish it off =)
good work, its written beautifully.

okay so I was going to read one of your later stories in this series first but I decided to start at the beginning and I just have to say damn, you've written a continuous series with like 5 books? I just have to commend you on that and just by reading the first chapter, your writing style is kind of immaculate. Crisp. Clean. Descriptive. And easy to read. I can't wait to get into the story.

And how do you write a series like that? May seem like a dumb question, but right now I'm. Writing a trilogy. I've written the first two books. I plan to write the third over the summer. Id love chat sometomes. You seem like an awesome writer which makes me excited!

I feel so lame lol I've read this before but never commented <3 love it but always have to put default layout because of it's on the right-ness lol

So I checked my email and got the story notification T-T
I feel like an idiot for some reason xD

just read chapter 1 and adore the story so far! it's brilliantly written and i cant wait too see the drama unfold =)

:o
Are you okay??? :o
Well, onto the story...?
I love how Meira is such a good friend towards Hermione :3
I wonder what happens when she finds out Meira's secret...
Update soon Dx

“What we’re you saying?” Hermione asked, “Never mind…” I shook my head.

*were

That's it :P lol I was being nitpicky xD
Yet again another great chappie c:
Eww I feel sorry for Ron :p

Moaning Mrytle -giggles-
XD
Ahh I remember this part in the movie xD
Great chappie c:
UPDATE SOON!! :DD

Sorry for not commenting lately Dx
Anywho I adored the latest updates and you better update soon, mk? Cuz if you don't I'll be sad and kill someon- cry ok? :) <33

I really enjoy what you've done here. I love the layout and I love the way you describe things. Very interesting and put together. I like it!

Firstly, I would like to mention that while the individual pieces of the layout are quite lovely, the red font on black background is a little difficult to read. Otherwise, it was really nice! :D For the summary, I really like the little bit of mystery behind the girl. I'm going to guess she a vampire because blood, vampires, ;) But, just for the record, (and this may just be me and the person who yelled at me for it) but I've heard that constant "..." actually weakens your writing but that could just be a personal belief.

You use a lot of detail in your writing from what I could tell, which is a good habit to have. Not being a Harry Potter fan (I've never seen the movies or read the books. Well... I saw the first one and the one with Cedric in it xD), it was nice to imagine what everything looked like.

My posture was proper and my chin held high, I showed respect to my elders.

The comma should be a semicollin (;) because "I showed respect to my elders is an independent clause, as is the first part of the statement.

Also, for the statements describing her father, "then" should be "than" because "than is for comparing and "then" is used for time.

my mother added with a slight glance to my father who fidgeted in his chair, her voice was fair and soft.

Again, should be a semicollin and not a comma.

It seems like a cool story so far. My only question (maybe I missed it?) was which parent was a vampire and which was a wizard/witch? Otherwise, nice job so far(:

First off I love the title, something like that always catches my eye.
I read the first chapter (will read more later) and honestly I like it.
It was very much detailed but not over the top, which can ruin the story.
I use to not like to read vampire stories but I've grown to like them now since I'm starting one.
I really do like this, I'm not fully hook since I haven't read but one chapter but I will read more :)
Overall good story.

I read it :P i'm not really a harry potter fan but this was really good :P

I wasted no time this time :) I read it and loved it :) I loved the second Harry Potter installment and I absolutely love your take on this :)

AHHH! You updated alot since I last read this :) I have been working alot. I read all the chapters I have missed and I absolutely LOVE this story. Your take on it is so unique! More soon love!

I really, really, like the banner. It's all.....awesome. :D I couldn't think of a better descriptive word, haha. It's really nice, and so is the layout. :)

The summary has me very curious. I like the way that those things seem to be his thoughts while he's sitting there, waiting. It's very interesting to get pulled into the character's mind right off the bat. So, he's a vampire, eh? I'm not a mega Harry Potter fan, but I know enough to know it's a wizard school? So this guy's a vampire wizard, or what? Well, now I'm curious. Time to read more. (:

Chapter One

I like the way you opened this. The detail, I mean. It's like I don't have the usual tunnel vision I have when I read other stories, and I can focus on the surroundings, where I'm at, besides the main character and all their woes, for a second. (: I liked that. <3

Well, that cleared up my early question. Half witch, half vampire. Should've seen it coming, but didn't. Nice idea, though. (: <3

Blood twisters? I do believe that's the vampire version of a twizzler! :) Cute.<33

So, with the way you ended this, I have a feeling that her being part vampire will come into play in the future. I look forward to that, because I'm immensley curious to know what happens when that is unveiled.

Really, this is amazing. :) Your detail is nice, and your vocabulary is interesting. I enjoyed reading this. (:<3

I am a Harry Potter whore XD
Someone's been staring the movies down! Lmao
Good job. You have just the right amount of description vs. dialogue.
I did notice a few spelling and gramatical errors, nothing that can't be fixed.
Keep going! *subscribe* I love vamps and HP so this is interesting to me.

I really like the layout and I think the colour scheme worked out nicely. Onto the story, I think that it's certainly an interesting concept (I am a massive Harry Potter fan) and I like how you don't change the characters of Harry Potter into completely different characters just to fit the story - it's nice to see someone who respects that kind of thing. I did spot a couple of little mistakes and I think that you're supposed to break up the paragraphs when people are speaking. I don't know, unless you've meant to do that.

Anyway, I think that it's a great story so far and I'm interested as to what's going to happen next :)

I am immensly game when it comes to this story. I've been a massive Harry Potter fan since is was 9 years old. I even role played Harry Potter in my spare time around the house until I was like 17? I carried a wooden stick with me >.> (my wand) Don't judge.

Anyway, I'm excited for this. I really like how you piece your work together and that you leave suspense in the air, drawing me back for more. I wonder, in the second chapter , are those two boys Ron and Harry? Hmmm.

The banner too is pretty, I love the girls eyes! It suits the story so well.
I'm subbing and I'll be back for more!

- RP.