Glitter in the Snow - Comments

I love the layout. It's so beautiful!

Also, the first two chapters were great, although, if I wanna be truthful, halfway through the first chapter I got bored. Maybe shorten it or have some action? It's sometimes better to introduce a character through action than JUST description.

But I must say that your description is beautiful and I say good job! :)

First I like to say I love your layout and banner picture

After like the first couple of paragraphs
I fell in love with this story for some reason
I still don't know, I love your descriptions and dialogue
You have a lovely balance of both.

I can't wait to see more from your story
I can't wait to see how this story ends

Keep up the good work dear

<3

I absolutely love your story. It's original and brilliant! I can't wait for an update. :D

I love your story!! It's so original and great!! I'm very excited to see more of this. You would make a brilliant author one day, I really do love this

I love the layout, its beautiful :)
I love the details, the imagery
I would love to read more of this so you better update soon <33
Basically the person above stole what I was going to say :S

I love how this is starting.
I love the style of writing, the way the narrator talks to the reader, really makes it quite personal, and that's nice to see.
I love how scatterbrained she is, how relatable in that no one can stay on track when telling a story like that, especially one that means so much to that person.
Love it so far! :)

I've always hated reading those stories, you know. The ones where the girl looks in the mirror and sees a Plain Jane, even though she's prom queen material. I look in the mirror and I see me, Natalie McKendry. I see my too-big grey eyes, my too-small nose, and my favorite attribute- my manageably curly black locks. I don't hate myself when I look in the mirror, but I'd be lying if I said I'm ever willing to leave the house without makeup on. I really do like that, it's a good beginning and I'm taking a shot in the dark and saying that this isn't going to be one of those cliché things we see on here all the time. It's original and fresh, something that isn't seen on here all the time.
"Wait!" I called before he could get too far away. "You never told me your name!" I didn't know why, but this was suddenly important to me.

He turned around and grinned. "It's Felix. Felix Argenti."

I like this, to be blunt.
I'd like to see more soon. :')

I know there is only one chapter, but I love this story already. I like how it's different, the way its written and presented, it's refreshing and original. I hope you keep writing and updating often because I want to keep reading!