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  • pixie dusttt.

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    she left! :o
    well, it kinda was inevitable...
    i hope she gives him a second chance...
    please update soon! <3<3

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    July 19th, 2011 at 07:18pm
  • Fictional.Reality

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    Oh boy! I hope she gives him a chance to explain.
    But somehow i think that won't happen.
    <3 Michele
    July 19th, 2011 at 02:49pm
  • mistery gurl

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    woah didnt expect her grandma to do that, she would be pissed if she stopped somewhere for the night, and when she got home zack was there, having driven all night
    July 19th, 2011 at 10:56am
  • angy_something

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    Fuck yeeeah. I feel bad for Kay buuut I'm very happy she did it cuz it made Zacky see how wrong he was and finally break up with Gena. I cannot wait for more to see what Zacky is gonna do to win her back.
    Love ya
    July 19th, 2011 at 06:22am
  • cruciatus.

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    Awwww, I feel so heartbroken for Kayla. All I can hope for is that when she sees him in North Dakota and realizes that he loves her enough to go to that god forsaken nothingness of a state, she'll take him back. He wouldn't leave nice, warm California for that place if he didn't, and she has to notice that. :) I can't wait until the next chapter, Batman, even if it's the last chapter. Sad
    July 19th, 2011 at 06:09am
  • Mrs Synyster Gates

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    NO WAY you can end this in two chapters! there is way to much to do and say. Ahhhh
    July 19th, 2011 at 01:41am
  • a venom

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    can't wait to see what's going to happen next
    July 18th, 2011 at 08:55pm
  • Star Angel

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    i dont want this to end sad tears lol
    July 18th, 2011 at 04:46am
  • Fairy Princess.

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    Loved the update and I'm gutted that there are only two chapters left! Can't wait to read them but I'm going to be so sad when it does end!!
    July 18th, 2011 at 12:17am
  • pixie dusttt.

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    Zacky's going to get an earful from her...
    He's going to know what's going on right when he starts talking and he's going to freak..
    please update soon! <3<3

    =]
    July 17th, 2011 at 07:12pm
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Poor Kayla!!
    Zacky is gonna be sooo confused... Maybe not.
    Only two more?? I'm gonna cry!
    July 17th, 2011 at 02:10pm
  • RuthieGates

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    Zacky is screwed =/ And not in a good way.
    He should have just broken up with her, then this wouldn't have happened.
    July 17th, 2011 at 02:06pm
  • angy_something

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    Zacky is soooo fucking stupid. He just lost a very good girl/person/friend. He's sooo fucking stupid. I hope Kay has a good choice of words for him.
    I'm very sad this is coming to an end but I know it's gonna be a good one. I hope that inthose two chappies left. Zacky makes it up for Kay. They both deserve to be happy at least. Even after allt he shit that went down
    Love ya. ;)
    July 17th, 2011 at 08:08am
  • mistery gurl

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    what an ass, he just lost the best thing for him. i hope she doesnt go back to the guy she was with when she went to cali
    July 17th, 2011 at 07:30am
  • cruciatus.

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    I have a feeling that all hell is going to break loose, although I definitely am interested to see what's going to happen and what Zack is going to say about what's been going on behind her back. It's an amazing story and though it's coming to an end, I'm going to love it forever and keep rereading and rereading it. :)
    July 17th, 2011 at 05:27am
  • Fictional.Reality

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    :( Can't really blame her, i would feel the same if it happened to me!
    And in all honesty, i hope she gives him a piece of her mind!
    and only 2 chapter left!!! My mind is racing with all of the things that could happen in just two chapters!
    <3 Michele
    July 17th, 2011 at 03:51am
  • mArty_m3lla!

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    only two left? please tell me that you're going to do a sequeeeeeeel ;C
    July 17th, 2011 at 03:25am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    I knew this would happen!
    Zacky is gonna get shit for this!!
    July 15th, 2011 at 05:11pm
  • littlemisslonely

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    Oh my fuck. I cannot wait for the next update. Wacky is sooo fucking screwed and poor Kayla is gonna he heartbroken. :(
    July 14th, 2011 at 11:08pm
  • a venom

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    can't wait for more
    July 14th, 2011 at 10:55pm