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  • Fictional.Reality

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    Finally! I just hope nothing stops him this time from breaking up with her
    please oh please just let him go through with it
    <3 Michele
    June 26th, 2011 at 05:01pm
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    loved it
    June 24th, 2011 at 10:09pm
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Awesome update!!
    June 24th, 2011 at 07:05pm
  • pixie dusttt.

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    I really want him to break up with Gena already!!!!
    please update soon! <3<3

    =]
    June 24th, 2011 at 03:23pm
  • Fictional.Reality

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    I am crossing my fingers that him breaking up with Gena goes as planned in the next chapter
    and i hope the guys give him the right advice when it comes down to the two of them
    <3 Michele
    June 24th, 2011 at 05:25am
  • cruciatus.

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    D'awww, that was adorable, Batman. I think it's incredible that Zacky didn't do anything with her in the guest room because he has respect for Kayla's grandmother, and I think it's cute that the two of them get along together. I definitely can't wait to see your next chapter! I'm so excited my head might explode. tehe
    June 24th, 2011 at 04:23am
  • angy_something

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    Aww I'm very glad they got along. I hope Zee leaves Gena fast or else shit will hit the fan.
    Love ya
    Ps. I hope you do a sequel. It'll depend on the end buuuut I wish you'll do a sequel.
    June 24th, 2011 at 04:18am
  • Mrs Synyster Gates

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    So so cute together now man up and dump Gena.
    June 23rd, 2011 at 02:38pm
  • angy_something

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    Wooohooooo a pagey. YaY!!!!!!!
    June 21st, 2011 at 09:31pm
  • angy_something

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    Ohhh some suspicion on Kays part. 0.0 Zacky is gonna meet the grandma. Such a gentleman. LoL
    Love ya
    June 21st, 2011 at 09:30pm
  • cruciatus.

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    Aww, that was a cute chapter. I can tell that Kayla is starting to get a little curious about what he's hiding, and a part of me wonders just how far she's going to go to find out what it is, or if someone will slip up and say something to her. I also loved the fact that, even though he can't exactly take her to his house right now because of Gena, he made an effort to make sure he had some time with her and that he did something with her. In Love I can't wait to see what happens when he meets her grandmother, and if her grandmother will be able to pick up on something that Zacky is hiding.
    June 21st, 2011 at 08:46pm
  • a venom

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    loved it
    June 21st, 2011 at 07:37pm
  • pixie dusttt.

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    awww
    Kayla's absolutely head over heals in love with him!
    She's gonna hate Zacky so much when she finds out he was cheating on her...
    she's starting to get suspicious!
    Zacky better break up with Gena soon!!!!
    please update soon! <3<3

    =]
    June 21st, 2011 at 06:57pm
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    She is startin' to ask questions ...
    Zacky needs to hurry up and break up with Gena!
    June 21st, 2011 at 05:26pm
  • Fictional.Reality

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    Why do I have a feeling that her grandma wont like him?
    Zacky better act fast on dumping gena, I have a feeling his is gonna get caught with one of them and he will loose both
    <3 Michele
    June 21st, 2011 at 05:11pm
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    Why do I have a feeling that her grandma w
    June 21st, 2011 at 05:10pm
  • Mrs Synyster Gates

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    Yeah I'm with Brian. Grow some balls and dump her already.
    June 21st, 2011 at 12:47pm
  • Megan Shadows

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    so im gonna sit here patiently and wait for zack to either break up with gena or get caught but really zack needs to grow a pair and just dump her
    June 20th, 2011 at 07:13pm
  • a venom

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    can't wait for more
    June 20th, 2011 at 07:07pm
  • angy_something

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    Ughh I'm hating Gena with a passion. Zacky is a fucking coward. He should totally break up with her or else he would be miserable with havin to lead a double life. Plus she's just a dominant little bitch. Ugh
    Love ya
    June 20th, 2011 at 06:19am